| Reviews for Team Fox |
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   Monster King chapter 23 . 2/7/2019 Great job |
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/21/2017 There are so many things wrong here. 1. Pein is 6 paths and none of them can use those jutsu 2. The flames of amaterasu cannot be put out by anyone or anything but the user (therefore it cannot be turned from black to orange) 3. You can't just destroy an ultimate defense and attack like the susanoo just by stopping rain -.- 4. Madara has much more stamina than this, he fought the first hokage for what? 3 days straight? Not to mention he didn't even use any chakra costing Justus here. Also, being caught off guard like that? The second naruto needed to talk would've been enough for him to escape |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/20/2017 Few things 1. The chunin fight between shikamaru and temari didn't happen in your story 2. The uchiha fighting style is the interceptor fist 3. Akatsuki is dying off waaaaaay too quickly, they're down to what? 5 members? And all within less than 7 chapters (give or take) 4. Last thing. For future reference (as in any other stories) it would be best to take things slow. More character interaction, at the moment the entire team fox is OP as hell. Slow it down, all the scenes look quite a bit summarized |
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/15/2017 What do you have against Tobi? |
| Tohsaka143 chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 Dont you mean Madara Uchiha? In Naruto, Manda is the giant snake Orochimaru summons. |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 11/2/2016 Please update this story. |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 11/2/2016 Hahaha this chapter is awesome. |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 11/2/2016 Am happy that Naruto And temari and kankuro helps gaara and I hope that gaara will get stronger and hmm am sorry for pointing this out but there are some spelling mistakes in this chapter but am not sure about other chapters but I still looking forward to reading more of this story. |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016 am glad that Naruto And kurama (Kyuubi) become brothers and would Tell Naruto about kurama past and his father six path of Sage and tailed beasts and thank you for making Naruto And Hinata story and Please keep itachi and third Hokage alive in this Story and please let Naruto have sub elements Bloodline as well and I hope that Naruto And Hinata and kurama meet other Uzumaki Saviors and please update. |
| ethan.lukkar chapter 23 . 6/26/2016 Magnificent story |
| Ahyah chapter 23 . 6/12/2016 A good read. |
| Sai and Ken chapter 11 . 2/1/2016 Ken:Dental plan...*Snickers* Sai: Ha. That is a good one |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/1/2016 "Tsunade"? "Earth shattering"? dose unintentional puns doe |
| Alwinfy chapter 1 . 12/17/2015 derp |
| num chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 lol seriously? (Ahem *cough* I have very important secret to tell you. first is i am a genious.) seriously that was a really narcist thing to say. |
