| Reviews for Trapped |
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  your number1 fan chapter 15 . 12/5/2016 hurry i wanna read more your very talented |
 MODERATOR chapter 2 . 9/12/2015 Can i just see what the story is about please? What happens, who's trapped, and how and why. Why should I read this is don't know what's going on? |
| hobbitfanforever chapter 11 . 7/20/2014 Nooooo! Please more! I was really enjoying it! |
| ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 14 . 12/30/2013 then how did bens hand get burned in the sun when he out his hand outside? And why did the omnitrix say all that stuff? How did he go intangible and fly ect? |
| Obsessivebookdiva chapter 2 . 11/5/2013 Loving how you brought ghost freak back in a way! |
| Obsessivebookdiva chapter 15 . 9/1/2013 What just happened! XD |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 15 . 7/8/2013 Oh my goshness! He's either really crazy (poor thing) or there's something going on...I look forward to reading the sequel! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 14 . 7/8/2013 Hmmm...I don't completely believe it, but maybe that's my paranoia wanting to keep all options open so I won't be tricked later on. So intense! I love it! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 13 . 7/8/2013 Just out of interest, are those nonsense words or do they actually mean something? Amazing chapter! It's so exciting and suspenseful! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 12 . 7/8/2013 That 'blood candy' thing is actually pretty interesting. I have a tendency to get blood noses a lot, maybe I'll try it sometime. Great chapter! Poor Ben, I hope he'll be able to fight back against Zs'Skayr |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 10 . 7/8/2013 Interesting, it seems Ghostfreak is becoming more powerful. Somehow I'm not sure an exorcism will work, but we'll see. Great job :) |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 9 . 7/8/2013 I love Alien X. He - um, it? - should be in the show more often. Sevenseven had it coming. Serves him right for picking a fight. Oh well. Ben's not going to feel good after this. Nice chapter! The story gets more exciting with each one! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 8 . 7/8/2013 Animo is a psycho. But it would be interesting if you put him in; although he might make things worse...:D I'm assuming that Ben's reaction to the light is a result of Ghostfreak's weaknesses. Awesome job with this one! :3 |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 7 . 7/8/2013 Man that Ghostfreak! He's up to something sinister... Awesome job with this chapter. You're doing really well. Keep up the good work! :3 |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 6 . 7/8/2013 So much excitement! I bet it's Ghostfreak's influence that's causing the weirdness in Ben. Great job! |
