wow that is such a good story i cant believe is abandoned :(

I'm rather intrigued to see where this one would go. Hopefully you'll come back to it and finish it off

Wow! that was amazing! :)

please tell me that you're still working on this?...

Are u doing to update? I hope you do I really love this fic.

Please update...love the story already...beautifully written!

Wow this is sad :( But I'm really looking forward to him seeing Lois again :)

ppmsx

Question...How is, this piece being so wonderfully fantastic, and all, this incomplete?

Its brilliant!

Love the Death Cab lyrics. I hope you continue this storyline and see where it goes.

Wow. That was absolutely beautiful! I got misty eyed there for a while!

I hope you update this soon, because I look forward to reading it. You definitely did a phenomenal first chapter - I'm totally hooked already! From Clark's sadness and loneliness, the brief description of how he'd held tightly to Lois, hopeing she'd never leave him...his grief was palpable in just that short span of writing. And then the confusion at the end.

I'm hooked and I can't wait for more!

very interesting... can't wait to find out what happened. i'm just happy that sunrei decided to tell you to write another story because you are a great writer and i enjoy your stories a lot. please update soon

Excellent writing! I really wonder where you are taking us this time…is this the beginning of another saga? Please update soon!

WOW, it went from emo (I thought he was gearing up for suicide) and then it went to interesting.