Try hiding in the Labyrinth...

(winces)
Jareth is SO gonna kill Sarah for this!

Jareth's gonna kill him...

(smirks)
Even The Scarlet Pimpernel?

um what exactly is the Boys and Girls Club? Is it an orphanage or a summer camp?

OK why is Sarah asking someone else to help her with her own problem? I mean I get her calling on someone when she needs them but I always saw Sarah as "I'll face (it) alone because that's how its done" kind of girl.

UUUUUUUUmmmmm... Why didn't the police INSIST on police escort and watching her home & work place? It's the Joker! I wouldn't be surprised if they tried to get her out of town and set up a trap for him!

Oh of course. Because Sarah is the new Light of Gotham, and any die-hard fan can tell you that Joker loves Chaos, Despair, and bringing out what he consider the True Human Nature (basically the evil part of us).

Oh Jesus poor Sarah. Poor SETH!

... Sarah. For shame. You are leading that poor guy on.

Also thank you for clearing up their living situation. With Sarah's success she should be able to afford a penthouse which she does she just shares it with another human being.

I am already loving this. Sarah is to Gotham what Superman is to Metropolis: Hope.

Holy Shiz, this was a freaking amazing story! MOAR MOAR MOAR!

U r awesome, this story was completely awesome! So glad I came across it

OMG! I fricken LOVED this story! I started reading it on a whim and didn't stop until it was done! My god I'm just smitten with this! I honestly almost never comment on stories, good or bad, but your's I couldn't NOT comment after I read the part where you said the story wasn't worth the wait! Honestly this was an extraordinary piece of literary genius! I concede that some parts were shaky and there were a few mistakes, but the story itself, wow just wow. I know joker is hard to right, but you did a pretty good job at portraying his crazyness. I really look forward to reading more of your stories!

I just re-read this, after finding it years ago, and I still love it! Its rather bizarre actually, I didnt picture the Joker in the chapters he is mentioned, I thought of Rumpelstiltskin from Once Upon A Time, probably because I just watched an episode before reading this again :/ Bizarre, but I could see him clearly as if you were writing about him, not the Joker.