What a pretty story. I want the next chapter please.

TOO CUTE!

My only advicie is to keep writing!

practice makes perfect!

WALLE ROCKS! sorry i am a big fan of walle's. first i want to tell you that his pet roach's name is Hal. its true i know for a fact. and second WALLE ROCKS!

I've seen a lot of worse 2nd fics than this. Heck, I don't even have like, my first 10 fics I wrote online anymore. They were that bad. XD

Nicely done. Good detail. Didn't see any grammatical errors really. I esspecially liked the last line.

Well written. The only bit I was confused about was the bit where EVE asks "Who are you," because in the movie it sounded more like some kind of computer syntax rather than an actual phrase. However, this is probably an error on my part, not yours. I enjoyed this; keep up the good work.

Hey, this doesn't suck. This is actually quite good. I have no problem with it. Your writing style is fine, and you did much better then my first shot at a WALL-E fanfiction. My only suggestion is that if you ever make another WALL-E story, I would think it be best not to re-write something that people have already seen in the movie. Sure, it gives deeper insight as to what the characters may have been think at that time, but there are way to many of these type of fics. But of course, this may have just been practice in how to write in the WALL-E section. It isn't easy writing a story without any dialogue.

I thought it was cute! This is one of my many 'favorite' scenes in the movie, I'm glad to see someone's put it into narration. )

I think it's adorable. _ EVEs laugh is one of the things I love so much about her, it gives her life.

Aww, it doesn't suck, I think it's good, if a bit short maybe. It's good though for a one-shot.

No it was good! Very well done for descriptions.

(Just remember to do a disclaimer for music and the movie)