Great story.
i really liked the case, that was well done.
and i like that tony isn't too mean in your story.
cheers
Maya

This should have been an episode! Or many episodes. This was seriously amazing. One of my favorites. Such good writing and good action. Just. Wow.

Terrific premise, excellent plot development, great character portrayal, nice showcase for Tim and the team. Whoo-hoo - really good story!

Good story really loved reading it.

I've read this fic several times over the years. In my opinion, definitely in the top 3 of the best NCIS fics of all time, if not the best. I love this so much—it was so good!

Oh, that was wonderful. The plot was unique, the characyers were week written, and you showed off Mcgee's badassery which I appreciate (even though I am a Tony girl at heart). Also, I loved your oc's. I'm definitely checking out your author page.

Just finished it!
This was an amazing story, very well written. Not only was it a great plot line, but you also nailed the characters. Every piece of dialogue was worded exactly how they would have said it! That along with the level of desciption made me fell like I was living the story. Everything around me dissapered and I was surrounded by the events in the story. When anything bad would happen, it was a real punch in the face. Overcome with emotion because of the horrible thing Reams had done to McGee and the others. Wondering if Tobias was okay or if Tony was going to get hurt. Hours upon hours passed, with me wanting to get from chapter to chapter! A mixpot of feelings boilded inside of me. Sadness, fear, anger, happiness, hope. All-in-all, I loved your story! I would like to thank you for this wonderful experience!
Thanks, Kat

Great fic! I enjoyed the story, the writing, and the ending. Thank you

Great story! It was like seeing a NCIS-movie in my mind!

Good story. Except you forgot McGee was drugged. Does Gibbs and Ducky know he was given ecstasy? It's a dangerous drug.

I really, really enjoyed this story, even though I lost an injudicious amount of sleep staying up to read it. The plot was well-paced and believable, the drama powerful, and the characters very well-written. I liked the mixture of action and character interaction, and I loved that you wrote McGee like the clever, competent agent that he is, instead of the bumbling idiot that some fanfic writers see. Thank you for this excellent story!

This was beautifully written and hugely entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing.

You took my nightsleep with that story :)
Coulndt put the tablet aside ;)

That story was well written, and I love it

Gwid

Having someone killed in front of you and being forced to take an ECSTASY pill - that is a huge Double whammy!

Did you have to kill Tara off? She didn't hurt nobody!

Wow I learned something new today.
I had never heard of the Cartwright Syndrome - honestly.
Although I did love watching the Bonanza TV series - Adam was my favourite character.

Great chapter.