aaaaaaaaarghh i love this fic so much! XD can't wait for a new update! (if they'll be one... .)

Please update this! I just stumbled on this story and I can't wait to read more. I love the dream sequences, and there's some wonderfully creepy bits in this too. You really know how to build up tension, so I hope you come back to this story eventually!

this isnt finishing it before christmas at all. im devastated. i was just so looking forward to finishing this tonight. by the way the hitcher and the moon were done very well. and brilliant foreshadowing, not too subtle, not to obvious.

wow, i loved this chapter brill story so far :)

This is gripping, can't wait for the next chapter.

Just one lil' question:

"idiotic Moon" is that The Moon, or Howard?

I'm a bit confused because i'm a bit thick! :p

Update soon, please?

Sisi...xx

Great: D

I'm so excited 2 know what's gonna happen: D

Oh, I love the Hitcher. And I love how evil this girl is becoming to appear - I mean, who can speak back to the evil Cockney like that? I want more Howard and Vince soon! Loving the story. :)

xx Froody

Yay, new chapter :D Made me happy, keep up the good work x

Wow wow wow, this story is so good, and keeps getting more and more intriguing. I just hate what Vince does to himself, yet it also hurts to see him abandoned by Bollo and Naboo. I mean, Bollo! "Sun is shining" and all that! Where did that Vince go, anyway? :)

And I love the latest plot development. Keep it up!

xx Froody

Wow, this is a great concept! I'm really enjoying it so far. It's just got that little twang of originality that I really appreciate. I've got to keep reading...

xx Froody

nah you wrote the hitcher quite well oh no poor vince :( i hope he wakes up soon and this girl intriges me hehe

Hiya! Lovin the story!

I thought you wrote the Hitcher well (once or twice he sounded a bit pirate-y but most of the time it was spot on!).

Poor Vince, black iris' *shivers* and he's usually got loverly blue eyes! I love the way you've built up the suspense with the unusual reoccuring dreams, we all knew there was going to be SOME kind of connection between the dreams and all this strange buisness Naboo's been taken care of... but I wonder what's going to happen to Vince? And also, is 'The Girl' involved. If she's cursed Vince or something I'll kill her (i don't care if she's a figment of you're imagaination, i'll create some figmant of my imagination to kill her).

Here's my other theory (but maybe I'm reading too much/ not enough into this story) but 'The Girl' she fancies Howard? Right, Howard's not really responding to it. Ends up sat on a sofa with Vince... there's Howince to come? Right! So long as you don't kill Vince - you better not kill Vince or I shall hunt you down *nods* he atleast has to let Howard know how he feels, otherwise it will be just TOO tragic!

In the radio show Bob Fossil gets trapped inside his own mind and Howard has to bring him out on a metaphorical sparkly pretty pony (i think that's what it was anyway) and I know it's not supposed to be nice to be trapped inside your own mind but if I had to be trapped in anyone's mind - it would be Vince's. I bet it's all sparkly in there, lot's of glitter and that (and there's a receptionist that looks like Amy Winehouse - genius!)! But this seems more serious than that. I really hope Vince is okay, or that Howard can do something to help. Maybe Naboo could send him on an errand that doesn't actually do anything but keeps Howard occupied (and thinking he's helping) whilst they sort out the real problem... . I don't like to think of Howard feeling all helpless. lol.

Great story!

Sisi...xx

Great new chapter: D

It's good u still writting this; I totally don't know what's going 2 happen next...

That girl seems well evil: D

dont worry about the Hitcher, my love - i LOVED him. I think it was PERFECT! REALLY! XD

i love this story, it's really quite gripping and i must say the girl is making me anxious!

"All the records are either in the shop display or safely locked in organised cabinets under my bed, sir.” - this is such a Howard line, i almost giggled! It was wonderful, and the way you wrote Vince's, well, episode or collapse or whatever we're going to call it was very gripping.

"The pain arrives very, very suddenly. It’s not expected. It’s not invited. It’s definitely not doesn’t feel himself hit the floor. He feels more like he’s been turned upside down" - this really got across how out of the blue and well... nasty for lack of a better word - this all is. I really feel for him. Update soon so i can breathe a bit easier! XD

Jacqui X

Oh my god! I can't believe that i missed such a great story! I will now be a regular reader! Please Update soon!1