Oh my god this is good! That's not the end is it? D
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Wow. That's some powerful writing you got there, mah friend. XD seriously, this story is very good. It was very interesting seeing that side of Near (if a little terrifying) and I absolutely love that last bit. MattxMello forever~ (oh my God, I sound like such an insane fangirl. XD)

Poor Mello :( I never really liked Near but I never imagined him doing something like that...Of course, this IS fanfiction after all...Hal is so nice :D Please keep writing I like the story a lot!

hmm. near can go burn in the fiery pits of hell. what a bastard.

Aw... stupid, stupid bastard Near... Mells belongs to Matt and Matt alone. He has NO RIGHT to lay a hand on him! And making Mello scared is simply and completely unacceptable. Mello is NOT scared. Ever. Seriously.

Like story, updates, updates!

Oh wow. This is just beautiful. I love it so much...

Please update soon?

Mello would beat the sh!t out of Near before he could even lay a hand on him.

It's really good; keep writing!

Wow. I love this. I've never thought of Near as being the, uh...rapist type...but this is a refreshing twist on the standard love story.

"Matt caught him as he fell, holding the broken blonde to his chest. “Oh Mells, I love you so much!”"

And that was so sweet it made my heart hurt!

Please update soon!

OMG i Lurrv this story!

Its amazing,AMAZING. omg 'Mello’s his side was torn open and crusted with dried blood. Sticky red liquid was still oozing sluggishly from the wound' That bit actually made me feel a bit queasy it was soo graphic...You get an A for that XD

Cant wait for the remaining chapters

CEB

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Fwee. I love this story so much!

Poor Mello...:c

OOHMYGOD poor Mello! this is great!

i don't think it needs to be edited it's very good

A very sweet story. The title in chapter 3 was especially clever. Update soon, please!

aww, poor Mello. Ahs well at least he is back with Matt now, where he belongs.