aj is my nickname. THAT FUCKING ARSHOLE OF A COMPUTER I SWEAR TO GOD I'LL KILL IT FUCK I'M MORE PISSED THAN YOU!

that was brilliant!please put up more i loved it!

It seems to me that there are 54 faces in that thing. I have to say that I do not hate you. I may hate your computer but no you. I think that this is a really good story and am so glad that I decided to read it. I love the whole attitude Bella has. haha. I can be like that sometimes too. Its a reflex reaction for me to hit someone if they sneak up on me too. Or if someone tries to hurt me then I would probably break their collar bone or their nose. Whatever I feel like at the time. I absolutely love Bugatti Veyrons! I was so happy when I saw that you had put one in this story. That is a pretty awesome car right there. I love the colors that you made it too. Those were really good choices. The Cullens don't really seem much like bullies at the moment. They seem kind of nice actually. Bella is more of a badass than they are. I think its cool though. I also loved the whole street cars thing. That sounds really good. I love how their is a hello kitty car. I would most definately never step foot in that car. I hate the color pink and would probably cry if I saw a pink car. However, if I saw a black one withh flames then I would probably jump up and down and clapping my hands and being like yay. I also have to say that I loved the whole conversation between you and your conscience. haha. That was good. Do you really have arguements with your conscience like that because that would actually be pretty funny. Anyway, I can not wait to see the results of this race that is going to happen. It looks like it is going to be interesting. Jacob Black coming into the story was kind of random. I can not wait to see what the whole Bella commanding people to do stuff and them having to do it thing is all about. First with Emmett and I am going to guess that was why Jasper was so confused and what she wanted Edward to tell her. Then with the whole Edward not being able to move thing. Anyway, I really just can not wait until the next time that you are able to update your story. In case you couldn't already tell, I really liked it. Oh and the whole thing with Renee was kind of weird. I was so not expecting that. And I love it when I don't expect things in stories and they happen. Its kind of boring when stuff is really predictable. Anyway, I think that I am going to stop this review now because it is way too long. I think that it is the longest one that I have written so far so congratulations on that. Anyway, good luck with the rest of your story. I will be waiting for you to update so I can read it somemore and find out what happens next. Hopefully, this happens soon but no rush. Make it as good as you can. 8D

Eh.

Not the best story I've read.

Sorry.

~L

54

nice story lol

haha I like this story I can't believe it took me this long to read it! XD

huh uh! Jasper is mine...how about we share?

XD

Jacob should have like started to pull out his wallet slowly and then Bella's like "The highest bet made was Emmett; $45 0 on me." And then Jacob stuffs his wallet back and goes "Uh... no thanks."

Your story is awesome!

Update soon.

And just do the race for the next chapter..that will be easy, make Edward and Bella kiss, they fall in love, and then you can take it from there!

Omg only if someone could start me off and I could finish like that lol XD

I've been wanting to write a story but can't think of what to write it about..but yeah update soon!

The exact same thing happened to me. So I deleted the story. But then I had the sudden urge to keep on writing it again so I put all my documents into a story again and that's where it left off. :) I think you should go with option 2, since the next chapter could probably be worth the wait. Although if you're getting sick of this story (hopefully not!), I'd go with option 1. Praying the next chapter will be coming up soon!

- EdwellaForever

wow...i really love your story..so plz don't delet it. maybe read some other things and find an idea once you clear your head. well ok bye

i think for now you should go with option 2

then if after like a couple of months you don't think of anything go with option 1

Sorry, I'm not logged in. But anyways,

I think you should wait till you think of something. I really really like this story!

Oh and maybe you should just skip to the 2:00 race.

Ha

~Leah

haha, bella's funny

if your going to put the word bitch in your summery, you should probably rate it higher than "k".