Fucking Sasuke. Kiss or punch? Punch 10,000 times then kiss!

I'm sorry but this story is kind of bullshit. The F bro? You call that a romance. Uhm...I cant even...whaa...* facepalm*. So did you get like super lazy halfway? The F man. This is one of those stories that make me wish I wasn't a fan. This was just...bad...just...goodness. That was really poorly written.

This is supposed to be a romance between Sakura and Sasuke? I'm already on chapter 13 and I don't sense any developing relationship. What's up with that?

I feel like this story is too brokenly written. Its hard to follow and there are way too many scene jumps. I don't sense much character or character development and I'm already on ch13. I like your descriptive writing but that's about all. Even the plot is questionable. Its just a bit frustrating reading this story. Too many gaps in terms of what the bigger picture is so far into the story. Where I am should already be the start of the conclusion seeing as there are only 16 chapters.

I was like "OMG they are finally gona kiss! OMGOMGOMG!" And then dot dot dot. Wait...What? DOT DOT FRICKIN DOT!?
What kind of monster are you to just cut it off at the end like that!? LMAO That was just cruel.

There must be something wrong with kakashi if the very first and only team he passed had two missing nin hahahahaha

I'm really confused about what's happening in this story :( but Its good

I really liked this story! Very well written; Best I've read in a long time :)

Wow. Just wow.

So stumbled into this story as I was perusing the complete sasusaku archives. Thank Kami for the eenie minnie game I played to land on your link :)) Read this in one sitting, and yes, I am weeping. How can you just cut it off like THAT. But, I LOVE YOU. For this. This beautiful piece. :) (insert feels massacre here)

Anyway, I liked that this isn't overly sweet. Actually, its subtlety made me love this :) Oh, you painted a very wonderful Sasuke. hihi.

Kudos!

- unsigned review from fancyacupoftea :)

OMG!, I LOVE THIS STORY! REALLY! *-* Congratulations for it!

The unknown speakers that appear every now and then sound so mysterious. This story is piquing my interest. I'll finish this by tonight!

I'm so confused. I mean, I like it and I keep rereading it to try to understand what the heck happened a little better...but I'm still really confused. What exactly happened to Sakura and in what order? How did Itachi go digging for information in her head and somehow ended up erasing her memory? Why were at least two safehouses destroyed (I think)?

It's a good story, though I'm not gonna lie, I started reading it for the romance and feel that got a bit of short shrift. I know you're retired and all but I really think the end could have used another chapter where both the missing back story is filled in and we see Sasuke go from careful regard for Sakura and an eagerness to kiss her. I got that he was getting used to being near her and maybe sparing her a second thought, but it's quite a jump to from that to pulling her on top of him for (what I hope is) a deep kiss. But that's just me being a romantic and wanting more... Thanks though, I write because I'm intrigued!

re-reading ;D
im surprised sakura hadn't tried finding out more about what transpired before she woke up
it was pure luck that she found out what she did :P!

I read this story again :)

Miss this so much.

It's my second chance hihi

Aw, I'm glad they get a happy ending like this c: Such a good plot!