Great chapter! Glad you'r back.
Can't wait for more :)

I've missed you, man. The fact that you posted a new chapter of this story says a lot about your writing. I feel it gives the Nerissa arc plenty of closure. The characters are perfectly in character throughout. I really do hope you'll not abandon the "W.I.T.C.H." franchise, because I'm loving your take on it. I've updated my "Punks of Thunder" story, by the way - go check it out. :)

I wonder who the new(?) enemy is. :)
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)

This chapter may be short, but it's nice to see the W.I.T.C.H. girls earning the right to rule some lands. It only adds to the responsibilities that they bear. Your muse, I believe, hasn't died down.

Please update soon

Awesome chapter. This story is one of the most interesting W.I.T.C.H. stories. Great work!

The opening scene with Will and that little boy was funny and sweet. It adds a lot of dimension to this chapter. What's more exciting is the other girls joining Will. What's even MORE exciting is the release of Queen Elyon being released from the Sword of Candracar by Will and explaining the story of the Guardians, especially of Kadma. I'm sincerely looking forward to more of this story.

And by the way, I've posted a new "Punks of Thunder" chapter. It's available right now to read at your leisure. Happy Easter! :D

Awesome chapter! Great job! It was really interesting to read.

The Will-Nerissa bit was the best thing about this chapter. The way they fight seems natural, and they show no signs of holding back. And let's not forget the power of the Sword of Candracar - unless someone has a pure heart, they can never wield the sword. It looks like Will, not Nerissa, is the sword's true master. And you don't leave out Irma, Taranee, Cornelia, and Hay Lin as well, for after they already have beaten their enemies, they earn magic swords that define the element they use. That's wicked cool! Now ALL the W.I.T.C.H. girls have magic swords. However, they've still got a long way to go.

This is a pretty good story, I mean sure, you have small grammer and spelling errors (pretty positive you mispelled artifact) but beyond that, you syntax is really good.

But what I want to commen you on, is the way you created the world. You have made one unique, but familar to us. The way you introduced the characters was pretty dang awesome and I became more and more negrossed to how this world changed.

Eh, you didn't steal tooo much. Having a line or two ripped from the book isn't totally wrong. The scene was different and the story just different enough that it didn't relly hurt the sstory.

Yeah the romance feels painfully forced into the story.

Awesome story so far.

I believe you've perfectly nailed the fight scenes with I.T.C.H. and their opponents, and you've nailed I.T.C.H.'s inner struggles too. Somehow, I believe the Will-Nerissa fight DOES deserve its own chapter, because however you write it, it's sure to be pretty exciting.

The pacing this chapter has - it works pretty well. W.I.T.C.H. is each given an opponent of their own to face. You've made sure to keep everybody in character while doing it. I look forward to the battles.