That was the sweetest. I love Kai and Rei. :3,

OMG! that was amazing. I've always loved the Ray/Kai pairing, and you just made me love it even more. That was very well written. I love it. Definite favorite.

longest lemon I've ever seen, and the most calm at that. When I usually read a lemon, they progressively speed it up, in attempt not to ruin the moment, but also to show more passion. With you though, u kept it nice and slow until it HAD to be sped up. In fact it almost appeared innocent and natural, though at times it made me a bit impatient. Also, u have the most descriptive make out sessions I've ever read. I haven't kissed yet either so it a mix between 'omg its hot' and 'omg cut it out' lol. If that makes sense. Still, I found that this was written extremely well, and a work of art in itself. Though I still prefer a slightly more 'impatient' touch with more teasing, this gentle side was extremely mature. Nice work, it was great.

Long but so worth reading! I absolutely love it!

That was long, but definately worth the read 3

I LOVED it.

This is definitly the best story with this pairing that I've ever read! It was amazing, and as far as I know, or could see, there wasn't a spelling mistake in it either(something that I have a problem with)! A great story!

oh my god just wow! and you really don't speak english as a first language? wouldn't know it by how well written and thought out and descriptive this is! ha ha ha ha i love the whole disappointed part in there... i know how you feel rei! this fic was just absolutely amazing and i really can't think of anythings else to say. it was mostly realistic (or at least the sex was

I have to say that was one of the longest and well written Lemon scenes that I have read in a while.

-licks screen-

That was amazing!

I loved it xD

I loved this! The descriptions were great, but not too long to the point where it became boring. I love the relationship between the two. You write beautifully.

If you're interested, I'm holding a little competition for writers. This fic was so awesome that you would definitely have a chance at winning. Please visit my profile and click on Forums. You can there read the Write the Wrong rules and apply. Applications must be in before midnight August 9th. I hope you can join; I would love to see some KaixRei goodness in the competition!

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that was sweet yet sexy, a very good mix

Nice job .~

So sweet..

this was incredible.

you wrote everything so sweet and detailed, it was so easy to get pictures of the story.

I loved it, your play with words was beautiful and you made Kai and Reis relationship look so lovely X3

*winks*

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Wow. Just... wow. ) I love this! It was a really good read... I'll probably come back a few days later and re-read this because I was kind of rushing through this. I hope you get more fanfictions out, soon! I liked this fanfiction.

Keep on writing!

- Ciamil B.

Oh, I am so happy now, Tink! Seriously, you should see my face! lol.

I loved it; it was adorable. This is the reason I love your writing so much, despite what you think, angst isn't the only thing you can write; you write wonderful fluff and pretty hot sex scenes, too! Seriously, I've missed your stories! I really do hope you're going to be writing more... And this story proves you can write in any fandom.

It was yummy, really sexy and sweet too. And I adored the ending!

Thanks for writing it! *loves the story and loves you, too*