I really enjoyed this - I hope you come back to it at some point.

Just a suggestion, your work would probably be easier to find if classified as a harry potter/lOTR crossover instead of "Book Xover". I only found this because it popped up on reddit.

Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

Celeborn is weird. He's Sindar, but married a Noldo. He has no actual royal title though, Galadriel on the other hand is a Princess of the House of Arafinwë, and therefore Noldor royalty, although she rarely claims the title.

I rediscovered this story after many years and I still love it. I do not know if you plan on updating it, though I hope you do. Seeing Harry interact with the various Kings of Gondor is an interesting foil don't you think? Good practice when he will have to return to England.

I was so happy to see that those poor kittens were rescued from their slavery. You might want to take a look at the film Master and Commander (though its early 1800s) or some of the old Errol Flynn-era films (Captain Blood, for example) for further inspiration.

I am enjoying this fic very, very much. I especially liked the scenes with the Valar. I look forward to seeing more of this story when your muse is ready to let you continue.

This is a fabulous story that I've been a fan of since the original story was being written. I sincerely hope that you find the time to continue on and finish this epic tale.

please continue this!

I really like that you focused a bit more on Ránewen without Harry, that was nice. And Turambar being a friend and confidant as much as Harry can allow him to be was nicely done,

I love how characterized Turambar - and of course he's tolerantly suspicious. I also like how you've handled Harry's wife and their relationship, as well as his relationship with his parents; I like that you've written them as a couple who are able to be reasonable about one another's needs and that they can work together well, and that his parents aren't perfect, but that they can make compromises is nice. And Elrond's grief for his brother... ;_;

That was a very sweet interlude, and the descriptions were rich and lovely. :)

Poor Haldir - I imagine having to spend an extended period of time chasing after Harry was... nerve wracking. And here we have Harry struggling to manage/navigate his relationships. It's a good growth chapter - his hang-ups are definitely understandable (even if Harry is characteristically overthinking it). His poor lady-love will need a good deal of patience I would think. :0

Goodness, what was in that cake? On that note (ha), the part where Harry listens to the Weasley's singing Happy Birthday is very poignant (and very Weasley, it was really sweet). This is a very dynamic chapter, it moves really well.

This is a wonderfully developed story. I love the characters and how you've kept Harry's personality mostly true to canon even with the centuries he has now spent on Middle Earth. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Almost 3 years! I absolutely love this story, both the original and this new and improved. I know that writing only happens when the muse is there so perhaps this review will help (it couldn't hurt, could it?) Anyway, I've read both versions several times and would love to see it continued.

As much as i love this story there are a couple of 'aspects' ( i think thats the closest to correct word to use) of the story that doesnt seem to sit very well with me.
So far we've seen a great deal about Elrosse, and we've seen it in great amounts of detail and described very vividly and grandly (which is something to be proud of) but we havent seen anything of Harry.
Im sure your thinking what is this guy on about, Elrosse is Harry. But i would have to contend that Elrosse isn't harry. Elrosse is a Elf in every conceivable way. He doesn't age, he has a 'magical' telepathic connection, he's an elvish prince, hell he even has elvish blood. You are aware im sure since you are the one writing this story that Harry hasn't been called Harry a single time after Galadriel said 'Welcome to Lothlorien Harry Potter' right. And its been over 500 years.
Personally i think there should be consequences of his seeming willingness to abandon all things human (since he doesnt even refer to the men around him as people but as mortals - clearly differentiating between them and himself - so clearly he doesnt even consider himself a human anymore). The easiest way i think to do this is to have him no longer be Harry Potter. You know when he accepted elf blood he abandoned his human blood therefore is no longer one of them.
But then again he has to have something to 'anchor' himself to earth since nothing else seems to. I mean the story has been over 60,000 words and he hasnt even tried once to even open a portal. I wasnt expecting him to run off back to earth within the first chapter but it would have been nice for him to at least attempt to open a portal to, you know, test that its possible.
I really think you need to stop writing about Elrosse and start doing a couple more chapters that focus on Harry because as of now, in my personal opinion, he is simply becoming an OC that shares harry's name.
I could keep going but this review is getting really long and to be honest im not entirely sure that your even continuing to write this story so i dont want to waste a review.