I love this story! Would you consider writing this in Edward's point of view?

lol poor Edwards car, I bet he wants to find them and get them back for scaring Bella and hurting his car, love it.

Aw... so sweet!

lol im not sure if it was supposed to be funny, but i laughed at the end. 'even though i DID scratch is car'

i knew edward wouldnt be mad :D

hes too perfect for that :D

the only thing i'd say to watch is things like this: He was going to be so mad. He would probably get really mad.

but i didnt mind. it was too cute! :D

aw!

i know its mean but i was laughing when bella was saying “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry.”

and i was thinking poor girl!

she has absoulutely no idea how much edward loves her

I really liked this fic, really cute! It also made me laugh, Thanks for posting!

That's really cute! And very funny. It's perfect because Edward would totally act like that. And so would Bella. I loved the line "I felt Edward stiffen." Just because he does that frequently. xD

There was just one thing that bugged me: one little grammar mistake. (I'm kind of obsessive with grammar.) You said 'you’re' and it would really be 'your', like the possessive. It's because 'you're' is for 'you are' and you wouldn't say 'you are car is ruined'. Hehe. That's the only thing that got me.

Nice story, it was fun to read!

AW. thats so sweet i wish my boy friend wud react like that anyways great story keep it up D

aw she was so scared that he was going to hate her. silly bella. edward could never hate her. good job

That was 2 cute! I loved it

aw... fluff

jajja! I loved it! It's just brillant

Aw, that's cute. Though I think Bella overreacted.

Oh poor Bella. I can see Edward being more concerned about her, not the car. He has plenty of money to fix it. ;) Great job at conveying Bella's emotions!

Emma