Reviews for Probable Improbability
WildfireDreams chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Intersting though somewhat hard to believe since Mello seemed to idolize L in the series, also the fact that he should only be fourteen at this point what with Light getting caught before the timeskip and all. Unless the timeskip did happen after all and I just missed it? But Mikimi didn't seem to have the death note for five years...
McCree114 chapter 6 . 6/6/2013
I really hope you one day get back to uploading more of this.
old gods chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
I don't know if you're a Christian or not but ,
When God punished the wicked he punished the people who sinned and did evil-doing
But Light was already doing one
In the Ten Commandments one of the laws are not to kill

Light was breaking that law, But the reason why people are still sinning and God isn't stricking them is because Jesus died on the Cross

And this is a question normally asked by atheist
"If God was real why is there suffering?"
It's the choices you make God can't choose your path (I mean he can but he wouldn't that wouldn't make true to his word). God said in the bible that "Choose Life or Death it is your choice but I prefer you to choose Life"
The choices you make will effect you in the future.

Light is stupid for thinking that he was more powerful
But I don't hate him

God said we should love
For example I don't hate killers I hate the fact they kill

I don't hate Lesbians or Gays I don't like the fact that they don't believe in God

Anyway that is all If you're an Atheist or Communist or a Mormon I don't care I'm not mad at your beliefs

And yes, Some Christians do like Anime
marthvader chapter 6 . 5/23/2010
Hm, I haven't read a Death Note and Azumanga Daioh crossover before... I was expecting it to be really weird, but it's awesome! And you've kept everyone in character so nicely, too.
chaosglory626 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
This is one of those stories that have really creative ways to make the thing work. Two stories that you wouldn't expect a crossover to be nothing more than pointlessly crazy, but you put them together very well. The summary drew me in as well and I thought, "If they have such an intellegent quote the story can't be that stupid." I'm glad I gave it a try.
jster1983 chapter 6 . 3/9/2010
Hey I just had a thought. If Osaka is working with L and Yomi is working with Mello then couldn't Chiyo possibly work with Near? She is way smarter then Yomi and Osaka. I hope the rest of the Azumanga cast shows up.
Lord Rebecca-sama chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
very nice story! i was not expecting mikami or the weird technology that mello has. near is still on L's side i hope! you really keep everyone in character, great job! _

~Lord Rebecca-Sama
sheiksleopardthong chapter 6 . 10/10/2009
This is a really great story. I like your style and it was brilliant of you to put Osaka and L together. They really make sense even though Death Note and Azumanga Daioh are two totaly different things! Keep up the story!
Shi no Rini chapter 3 . 10/9/2009
You make awesome cliffies. I can't wait to read chapter 4! X3
Shi no Rini chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
Oh, I can't wait to read chapter 3, but I have to do my homework. I never would have thought of Osaka in such a way! This is so awesome! I love the dramatic cliffhanger! "Light Yagami? He was the least of their concerns." GENIUS! XD CONTINUE! THIS IS SO AWESOME AND I'M NOT EVEN HALF WAY DONE YET!
Acobjum de Iliacje chapter 6 . 8/23/2009
Wow. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read in a long while. I was recently thinking of what it was like if the Azumanga characters cosplayed as Death Note characters but I never imagined it like this. This is better than I ever would have imagined and the plot twists are great. Please update as soon as you are able. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Cowdy chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Ahahah oh man this is fan-freaking-tastic! Well written crossovers can be hard to find, but this one is a jewel :D
Aliulo chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
Things look to be heading into an... interesting conflict. Mello has L figured out, and has some extraordinary technology at his disposal. Yes, it will definitely be interesting.

Wishin' ya the best've... well, I guess pretty much everything.

-Keshi-sama
Aliulo chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
Wow. This is the best thing I've ever read that includes Death Note in Azumanga(There have been a few others, but they were all pretty standard).

I do have one bit of advice. Try and put some transitions in between scene jumps. Other than that, I'd judge it excellent.

Now, according to a rating scale of 5s:

Keeping in Character:5/5

Remembering Former Facts:5/5

Creativity:4/5

Word Usage:5/5

Spelling:5/5

Transitions:2/5

Character Development:4/5

Plot:5/5

All together: 35/40, an excellent work.

Keep up the good work!

-Keshi-sama
InvaderKap chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
This is excellent. You have a very wide vocabulary, and your style is mesmerizing. I think I've learned more from your style of writing than I have over the past three months. This website needs more people like you. I wish I had something to tell you about how your story sucks in some particular certain way so that you could learn more, but I have nothing to tell you. You clearly know everything I know and more. You're amazing, and I look up to you. And I'm probably going to keep reading this, 'cause it's awesome.
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