I LOVE his! and cant waitto see where it goes! update again soon ok!? please and thankyou

Hmm System of a down nice selection.

Wow, this has been beyond creepy and bloody. But I just couldn't stop reading! It was too compelling. Too bad you gave up on it...

Is this going to be continued?

Wow. I'm so sorry for not reviewing before if I haven't, because I can't remember if I did. Anyway, so that and onto the next chappie! Oh, and I've caught a few grammar mistakes in here so you might want to check that out! Anyway, peace

Awesome story

You should update it

The beginning seemed to be a combo move from mortal combat but good chap

Is this going to update again? It has almost been a full year since the last update!

~LordGeovanni *Kupo*

Who dares say Edgar Allen Poe is stupid i just played the ballad annabell lee and could recite 9 stanzas by 4 or 5 grade hes so awesome and yes i WASS an overachiever now i am a slacker

Great chapter and story. This is really different from the rest. There were a couple of spelling mistakes, such as Kimimaru's last name being Kaguya, but besides that it was great. The insane Naruto makes you really see things from a different perspective compared to canon and other stories. And the end was great. I really want to know who that person was. At first I thought it was Itachi but you said he had blue eyes and white hair so I'm completely stumped. Anyway I hope you continue this fic. Update soon.

just have to say, this story is badass man. keep up the good work and please update soon. peace

I really love the way this is going, and I think it is incredibly well written. I look forward to your next post eagerly.

-Alexi Naori

ok i have no idea what is going on any more

it may be an odd story but it is an interesting 1 (plus i love the power u gave him)

well this is depressing

i better see some kick ass action soon