Reviews for Our Mother |
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CharlieBoneFan chapter 31 . 5/18/2019 Good story! |
Jaina Durron chapter 23 . 10/31/2015 I love how you work with foreshadowing. It's truly brilliant! |
Jaina Durron chapter 19 . 10/31/2015 Oh! I just realized what's going on. That took me a while . . . anywhoo, that's brilliant! |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 12 . 4/17/2013 Poor Jobal. I am sad... |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 6 . 4/16/2013 I read this... |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 5 . 4/16/2013 Padmé Nabberrie. Nice ring to it... |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 4 . 4/16/2013 hghihfdqcgfudge? Da fuq |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 2 . 4/16/2013 Find the 6. 222222222262222222 Find the frowning face. :):):(:):):):) |
StarWarsFreakyGeek chapter 1 . 4/16/2013 I hate episode 6 [Epi.3] but I love how people always puts the hospital first so people understand whats going on. :] |
Kilana89 chapter 27 . 2/23/2012 Hi, I knew Sabé (or what ever her name is sry) was padmé since you mentioned the pendent that Anikan(sp) gave her but I suspected it from near the begining |
Eldar-Melda chapter 31 . 1/10/2012 This is a great story. Continue the great job! Bye. :) |
Kamai6 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010 This looks like a great story! I look forward to reading it! :) Kamai6 |
Winterluna chapter 5 . 7/28/2010 Okay! Interesting. I thought that you should have spent more time on other character's reactions. Leia would have been much more welcoming to Anakin; Luke probably would have convinced her to do so. You need to show and not tell. If you're going to make Jar-Jar be even more clumsy with age, don't tell us. Just show us in a lot of ways. Like in Chapter 3, you told through another that he was clumsy whereas you could have simply had him clumsily get onto the kaadu. I did like how you put Sabé into this. It's really nice to get away from just the Original Trilogy for you! -Winterluna |
Winterluna chapter 3 . 7/28/2010 I thought your Gungan was really good, but it was a bit exaggerated at times. Just make sure that you don't overdo it so the reader can understand it. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to seeing if you will put Jar-Jar in there... -Winterluna |
serious starwars fan chapter 31 . 4/21/2010 that was amazing. hurry up and get the sequel up. |