this is darkly beautiful. it's chilling and wonderful and I really really love it. if you do decide to continue it, I will be here!

So it a been like... over 5 years... I really enjoy this fic and hope that one day you will continue it :)

This is chillingly beautiful

Wow! What else can I say? Your description is amazing, so is the way you write... so captivating. Very rare to come across fics that are written with such beauty...

What an interesting idea; Light getting the Death Note as a child. I love the description of him as a Shinigami. The build up of the plot so far has been really intriguing, I would have loved to read more of this story. It's a real shame there isn't more but thank you for sharing this, it's been so enjoyable to read!

The most engaging descriptive language I have ever read. I'm absolutely captivated.

writing is well ...amazing

I hate it when a really, really good fic is incomplete, but I guess you have your own obligations.

Tell you one thing: your writing style is AMAZING.

I've only recently started watching Death Note 'cuz its pretty short, and I dunno about Rem and Misa and Matsuda right now, it was annoying not to be able to understand them...BUT. It was a good read nonetheless.

Do continue...Someday. A possibly impossible hope. ;]

-berryboom

That last line just about killed me. :) This Light seems even scarier than the one from the manga!

This is a very interesting story. For me personally, the writing style feels a little disjointed with how you cut from scene to scene. And since the characters, excluding Light, hardly ever interact with each other, that makes each scene seem even more like a standalone. Beyond that, though, I love the actual concept of the story, and your writing is well done.

OMG I have no idea where you're going with this (OK... maybe, SOME idea), but I can't wait to see what happens next. Lovely mindgames you have here. 3

Aaawwwww...he's so freakishly adorable

I must admit I am more confused than not, but your writing style. My god, your writing style is too much. It's like a chilling caress; terrifying, electric, confident and gripping.

I wish that you're still active on FF, but a year gap would indicate otherwise, I guess. Wish you the best of luck.

i really love the writing style you use, it is ridiculously easy to do badly, but you actually use it really well.

that said, while there is nothing wrong with using zie etc, don't forget that singular they exists, and was even used by shakespear. remembering more synonyms is useful, even if one in the end decides on words one already habitually uses such as zie/zir etc.

Wow this is absolutely stunning! I Really enjoy reading this! I wish you would update soon! Please please update soon!