What a great story! It nearly made me cry when Lugnut almost died! I hope he remembers and goes with the Autobots, that'll be so sweet and a nice ending! But there was one thing that bothered me, the Decepticons weren't all that bad in the show, sure they were the bad guys, but, they could've done much more to hurt people other than demolishing in battles, and Megatron always did speeches about how they lot their home and how the Autobots oppressed them. I'd like to see more morally grey Decepticons and Autobots.

Why is the dialogue in bold for the bots?

After reading this through, I cannot view Lugnut the same ever again. This was just too pure! I loved the entire thing! I just wondered if this could have gotten one shots. Great Job!

A bittersweet ending but an enjoyable story.

Sorry to see Luggy go back to the cons, but I'm enjoying the cuteness of the story.

Evil Bumblebee...Evillll...no hurting Sparkling's feelings (glare)

Awww... Cute! Luggy remembers Sari! I don't think that will be the last time Lugnut won't be able to get the key from her...

Oh. My. Gosh. That had to be the BEST fanfic I have EVER read in my ENTIRE life! Kid, you got skills. There SO should be an episode made after that! The vocabulary was awesome and you got all the character's personalities PERFECT! And can't even tell you how awesome that was! It was awesomer than awesome! Like I said before, BEST FANFIC EVAR!

AWWW! I SO HAPPEE!

Loved it, so cute and sweet!

For some reason, I think the TFA Ratchet looks fat. Or is it just me?

Heh, pregnant pause, baby lugnut. Cute.

Though the whole "turned to a sparkling" prompt had been over used severely, I have to say you managed to take it and make an incredible story with it. The last chapter really got to my feels. Even though it was a bitter-sweet ending. Nice job!

this was SO touching! It mad me almost cry on the ending!

you should write a sequel. even if its a one-shot