-.-...WHAT A WASTE OF TIME TO READ THIS I EVEN SKIPPED THROUGH SOME OF THE CHAPTERS TO SEE IF I WAS REALLY A TRUE Soroku STORY AND IT WAS NOT ! ...my rating is a 10 out of 100

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I just wanted to say something before continuing to hopefully help your future writing! In this chapter, Sora's mom said that she and his dad could tell Sora liked Roxas and to not stop fighting for him. I felt like this was a little rushed, since Sora has been acting a little annoyed of Roxas's constant presence. He hasn't shown any attraction or feelings towards Roxas yet. So it didn't fit in really well. Don't try to rush anything. Other than that, it is so well written! I love it and am going to continue reading now!

pls have sequel where they are reborn

noo pls don't let this be the end

I'm surprised at how much I liked this story of yours. It's not something I would usually read. There were a few times where I got bored with it and wanted it to be over, but that's happened with several things I've read and I'm always glad to finish them. While I wish somethings went differently, I'm glad you wrote it the way you did, and the inclusion of the prologue was a good choice. I really loved Sora and Roxas's reunion.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read.
I couldn't stop after I started.

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THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! FREAKING LOVED IT! I cried soo hard in this chapter and I had dearly beloved playing in the background soo I cried a river TTUTT I regret nothing...,

OMG I CANT STOP CRYING! ;A; SOO SAD AND SWEET! BITTERSWEET! THIS FANGIC IS AMAZING! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

This was a great story and I really liked how you kept the main theme of kingdom hearts in it yet completely changed the story :D. As for sora's death and Roxas reaction as sad as it was it couldn't have been more perfect. Though I must admit I was waiting for the nameless key to take over sora and turn him into vanitas or something lol but still great story :D

So I thought I would review the final chapter instead of every single chapter in this story for one reason:

This story is actually so perfect that I should the human race ever be wiped out, I hope this is one of the things recovered by another intelligent species and preserved for the rest of time. I have never cried, laughed, cringed, smiled, teared up or been outraged at something as much as I did whilst reading this piece of art.

Thanks for completing this story, I would have liked a little bit more fluff between Roxas and Sora and maybe had a backstory to Roxas' scars, along with the Saix mention, but to be honest this story ended up perfect anyway so that's fine.

Lastly, I was skeptical about Sora dying and the fact that Roxas had to endure decades without him actually made me cry. But, as I have written above, this just increased the emotional outpouring by 500% making the story even better!

Thanks for writing this and please keep posting and updating stories, your work is simply awesome.

I love this story. Seriously, I found it a couple days ago and couldn't stop reading, even when I should have to get some work done. It's beautifully written and I love how you portray the characters. And I can't stop crying! It was that amazing! I want to read it again. One of my favorite stories I've ever read on this site, if not my number one favorite. I hope I see more SoraxRoxas from you soon. I wasn't originally a SoraxRoxas shipper but I think you converted me. Ok, I seriously am going to read this story again, right now (if I can stop CRYING!).

I'll just say this now, hopefully this doesn't seem offensive or hateful, but I didn't like the story all too much. You have a very good plot for the most part on the war (only thing I have to say about it is that you were trying to add too many great elements in it- they were very well thought out though, great job!), but it left so many elements and characters especially that you have added useless to the story. Of course it is always acceptable for a story to have some extra characters (but in this case it was WAY too much) but just like dialogue, if it has no purpose and is mostly for filler purposes, then I suggest not adding it all together. As for character development, you started out well on Roxas's part but that later, as he easily started to lose his sense of being a "Nobody", which was over 90% of this life, was broken down in a mere flash of a few chapters. Some events such as the wedding and especially the fighting scenes were rushed which in doing so, built little than what could've been built suspense and rising action. Speaking of building things up, the emotional part of the story was not AS evident in the middle chapters. When you had Sora's father and the little girl die (genius by the way, props) I didn't feel much of it. Not much was built, you just put them there. Another note I want to add is that the summary was deceiving, I thought the story would've been more on the emotional side and then bam, a war was going to take place.

Other than all that.

I LOVED how you made everything of the lore, Chasers, and ancestors and incorporated the keyblades into everything, very clever I would say; I can't tell you how much I liked how you thought. Keep up the good work and keep that BOOM factor with you!

you typed too much

this was so much beautiful story