That was absolutely great! Hope to see more PF fics from you.

Maayan

Very nicely written. Good flow of dialogue. There are some typographical errors. Perhaps a second proofreading by a different reader before final sending would be helpful. Keep up the good work.

*Sobbing* So sad. Made me think of that girl in my class that died, And my grandparents. *Sobbing* *muttering at other kids* Oh yes stare, because I don't care! There, I'm Done.

very nice, you really ought to write more. You portray our lovely characters soo well. :)