Why?! It's been 9 years... I just want to know. Why not post more? I feel extremely cheated at the moment having just read all of this and still being left with a cliff-hanger. It is excruciating! I do love the plot to your story though, it is incredible! If I were you, I would definitely make this a full-time job. (With your ideas and such and have it copyrighted that is)

Please, please, please post a new one! You have to! I'm begging you! Please publish a new one! I have to know what happened! PLEASE!

When does the next chapter come out?! I LOVE IT!

I wish there was more, but great things always end :( Wait, PLEASE tell me there's more! It's too awesome to end!

Where's the rest? You just stopped in the middle. It was very good up too that point though. And also, can you lay of the curse words?

I don't mean to offend you, BUT WHAT KIND OF CRAP ENDING WAS THAT! Your whole story was amazing, I literally couldn't stop reading, but now all I want is more!

keep going!

more please!

im waiting for more.

you can't stop! i won't let you! keep going!

Omg tht was freaking AwEsOmE!

Very interesting story! :D

I've read all 17 chapter's of this so far, and I really enjoy your writing style. You're very talented, and I hope you pursue a career in writing in your future. I'll be waiting for your next post. Keep writing. You've got the talent; don't let anyone tell you different.

OMG!

PLEEEASE UPDATE!

THIS IS AWESOME!

IT'S BEEN NEARLY THREE YEARS! D'X

nice! read this a while back from 'Fang's' blog. at first thought it was by james himself. keep it up