| Reviews for The Revel |
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Guest chapter 11 . 7/26 dude. i know you'll never update this after almost a decade, but you've literally written my dream lucius and i can't find him in any other fics. his complexity, cynicism & reluctance would make their evolving relationship SO satisfying if it played out further. |
lonne2 chapter 11 . 7/12 I can’t believe it’s been 9 years since the last update. If you should ever read this, I still think about it often and it’s my favorite story. Thank you for the 11 chapters. |
CRoseSing chapter 11 . 6/19 It is amazing how you took a reprehensible character and made him complex enough to capture the attention and interest of the reader. This was an intriguing story idea! |
theWererabbit chapter 11 . 4/27 one of the best lumione fics ever! |
Aprilmarsden chapter 11 . 7/10/2019 This is amazing! You are so so talented! A shame that this isn't finished as your characterisations are perfect and dialogue fantastic. The pacing is also spot on and I am do intrigued as to where this was goi g. Thanks for sharing! :) |
snowblind12 chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 I realize it’s been 8 years since you posted an update, but this story really sucked me in. I read it not realizing it wasn’t complete and now I’m desperate for more! Damn wiplash. Love your writing |
jakgarden2002 chapter 11 . 4/11/2019 Any chance of this very good story being completed? |
meruhime chapter 11 . 3/19/2019 I know you haven't updated this in years, but it really is one of a kind. I hope you get your muse back for it someday. |
Sinoritta chapter 11 . 11/21/2018 This is awesome! The best I've read so far. And I assure you I've read many stories about Lucius and Hermione. You made me believe in your story and the characters seem perfectly real. Please... PLEASE don't abandon this perfection! Maybe your can speed up the events a little? And finish it quickly? I really hope you can finish it. Thank you so much for the pleasure of reading it. |
annapsarudaki chapter 11 . 7/16/2018 What happens next? Captivating story. I especially like Lucius first person POV. Please consider coming back to it! |
FoxesRun chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Hi! I know that it has been almost 7 years since you last updated the story and I don't know if you are still coming on fan fiction or not, but I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write! |
rlsa chapter 11 . 1/25/2018 This was a very interesting story. The interplay from the characters is completely different than anything you’d think of. |
FeliceB chapter 4 . 1/6/2018 So it has been 7 years, but I would argue it is never to late for an update, please update. I just find this story so compelling, it is on my mind. You write so well, write us some more, please. |
Elvire chapter 11 . 12/21/2017 My fervent Christmas wish is for you to update this amazing story. Lucius is just so extreme but if there is anyone who can change him it is your thoroughly illustrated Hermione. Please pick this one back up again. |
Magzillasaurus chapter 11 . 8/14/2017 Ugh. Please come back and finish this one! |