*reviews even though nothing will actually happen anymore*

I don't know if I'm too late, but Luffy is pronounced LOO-fy... no sweat, I used to call him luffy like fluffy too... XD

love it

this whole thing was really good! it took me a while to read but i was trying to stay awake all night and so i found this and read it all! thank you for making this, and i love your divider line thing! its so funny!

I love it when are you makeing more

LOL poor Luffy, Zoro, Nami, an Usopp, no sleep for them that night. I wonder where Luffy even going get money to pay Nami.

Hee, maybe you meant this to be serious at first, but honestly this is turning into total crack. XD Which is totally fine, as it is labeled humor and fits the One Piece style just fine! Recommend to people in need of a laugh!

Neener neener pale face! Lol! Yes, Shanks and his crew are NOT good therapists OR doctors. ;) Totally off-canon, yeah, but totally fun!

Lol! While I don't know if even a completely sleep-deprived (and nicotine deprived) Sanji would not be able to cook (let alone steal from Nami-san!), I do find it HILARIOUS how Luffy hid the dingy, as well as what he forced the other guys to do to help them all stay awake.

"I cured Sanji!" *jaw drops open* Whoa - Luffy apparently didn't hear the part about how hard quitting actually is for chain-smokers. o_O He has no idea what's in store. (Though, it would be for the best if he actually could quit. Won't be nearly as easy as Luffy seems to think though.) For Sanji's sake, I REALLY hope this takes place after Chopper joins up...

Nami was a jerk face.

Himmy himmy himmy.

I'm just here cuz 17's so smexy.

Not interested in Usopp in lingerie, but...

This is pretty frickin' hilarious! Even if you do hurt Sanji too much.

I hope he gets rid of all the chemikanackanals.

And now I shall go review chapter 17, because it IS a sexy number, as are all those who are born on the seventeenth. *hintwinkhint*

Still going well, I say. Yes, you are good at explaining plot holes, although more random than the ending. I figured it was a dream, at first.

I would like Smoker on fire. Oh, the irony! Would his hair burn blue, do you think?

Okay, I completely lost it after "no pash poiny." Very original; very funny story. No horrible grammar mistakes, besides the slurr :)

I just checked the review I previously sent and it was cut off short! I didn't know there was a limit... Che, here's the rest.

Ch 25: Okay, why was sleeping together as a group considered a horrible sin in chapter 16, but now it’s cute? I SMELL INCONSISTENCY. (Cabaji Cabbage, AHAHA you win. XD)

Ch 26: “SAY SOMETHING ALREADY!” “Something!” Oh Zoro, you smartass.

*winces at all the screaming and stuttering* At least they’re not banging heads anymore…

*rescues Smoker from pile of ice* Buji desu ka, Smoker-taisa? *makes uke eyes at him*

Ch 27: “I can’t cook juice.” Neither can I. But I bet Sanji could. :P

The stalling part was kind of annoying…

"Yes, but... he's Luffy. And what he's thinking isn't always useful." *snicker*

Reverse psychology, LOL.

Ch 28: *starts singing “Do You Love Me"*

“Chemickanackals” is an awesome word. It should be officially added to the dictionary. :D

“I'll become the BESTEST question asker in the world!” The entire conversation between Luffy and Zoro was adorable.

Great work; I laughed a lot. _ I'm looking forward to the conclusion.