Great story! Thank you!

As tears pour down my cheeks, I'm glad that Jacob turned out to be a good guy.

Oh god that was so emotional. I almost started crying.

Oh...wow

Wtf? How did that make me cry so fast? Ugh holy hell that's sad.

Another amazing piece...I love it...and even shed a tear or two

Omg why. I'm currently sobbing. I love it

Love it

Well my dear, if that isn't enough to break your heart and make you cry, I don't know what would! Well done!

So Edward will be with Bella again, right, please say right? : (

I actually really liked it. If you haven't already you should make it into a whole story.

This made me cry, witch is sometimes hard to do...so that only means one thing...u r a very, very, very, very good author. (-:

This was a beautiful peace, BUT YOU NEED TO FINIH WHEN SHE SMILES! I love your writing, and I understand how school and work can be hard to balance, so pleeeeease finish it. Or I'm going to cry! I cried while reading child of the night, and while reading some of when she smiles. I hope you are majoring in some sort of writing! You have potential. Please, finish it. One more chapter is all it needs. :'(
I'm going through a really hard time in my life, and these stories are my escape from the real world. You are amazing, and seem to have a beautiful personality. Thank you for sharing all that you have already. I appreciate it, truly!
Lots of love to you!
Your biggest fan,
Grim F. Cullen

This was beautiful!

very good story but it was so sad:(