Nice AU story with a view into the future of Charah. Adults acting like adults instead of middle-school kids. Who'da thunk it? Thanks for sharing it with us.

I know reviewing a story that’s 10 years old isn’t probably going to be read by you! But I am going to anyway. This story is so perfect this is the way the story should have played out! With the things I would’ve added were Stephen & Mary finding each after 20 yrs & together! And of course Molly & Emma!

Absolutely love this story. 2nd time I've read. Thank you for sharing this with us

This story was just perfect. Absolutely love everything about it. Start to finish just amazing. Thank you for writing this.

I enjoyed the story but at the end I felt it went on too long and the last chapters were fillers.
I still found it strange that she told him she loved him then in the next chapter couldn't say it, which led to distancing and then Chuck's outburst, which personally was way out of character, Chuck likes to talk.
When did they get engaged?, when did they get married?, when she finds out she's pregnant and wants to talk to him in the limo and he's busy playing with his PSP, she should have grabbed it out of his hand and battered him with it, that section of the chapter annoyed me, his discovery of her pregnancy was ok, you write so well I was expecting better, sorry.
The inclusion of all the agents coming back was ok, just ok.
So all in all it was a pretty good story but in my opinion could have been at least two chapters less.

Not a review as i will leave a review covering the whole story at the end of the last chapter.
I get she's not one for expressing her feelings but she murmured 'I love you' in chapter eight which he heard her say, so why can't she say it again? i mean, you can't get any more serious in a relationship than they are right now, apart from marriage, maybe BR, you didn't realise it, it's cool but it just seems she gone backwards with her feelings or re-reading it again, he has his back to her, so may be she can't say it face to face yet.

I know it’s been a long time since you wrote this story but I hope you read this review. This is one of the best stories written about Chuck & Sarah. I wish they would have gotten them together in the manner in which you did there never should’ve been a Shaw or a Hannah to come between them they effectively killed the show when they did

A great story with a lovely ending.

awesome.. really well written.. thanks for the nice ending. especially since the writers of Chuck seem to be not awesome when they wrote the ending..

this was really great, well written and really emotional at points if you are true Chuck fan. I was glad to see Cole happy, of all the spies, he was most like Sarah imo... I was a little alarmed one of their kids became a spy, I figured Sarah would be dead set against it and chuck too knowing what they have to do and what it can do to them emotionally, but I have to admit it fits... especially with all of the mentors she has... great story

Really late to the party on this, but I just finished reading this for the first time, and it was fantastic. Not much else to say beyond that, but I really enjoyed reading this, and want to thank you for sharing it with us.

Great story. Well done!

Ughh Ellie is annoying...Always butting into other people's business/relationship. Sure she raised Chuck but she is far too controlling of his life. Great story you have written here. Have read it entirely like 3 or 4 times and every time, Ellie annoys the hell out of me. *mini rant over*

Great story though

Lovely story, thanks

Sweet story.