Reviews for Captured
shy angel x chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
Type your review here.I wish I could justt grab a hold of that hiashi,how dare he.
TheEternallyElite chapter 4 . 12/11/2015
Update or DIE!
icyxxrose chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
are you gonna continue the story ? kinda wish you do .
Kozume Kenma chapter 4 . 4/22/2013
Continue! please?
008080 chapter 4 . 4/18/2013
Wow, this is good...you should just make a longer chapter and update faster!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Who the fucking hell is Ayame?
Don't tell me!
A mary-sue?
CreativeMindUnleashesPower chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
Who is going to save her? Where are they taking her? I must know.

I only want to make this a sugestion (so you don't have to do it) pease let Naruto save her because in the serise he starts to date Hinata. So please let Naruto, it would be soooo cute

-Snorkels
happy bryce chapter 4 . 6/13/2011
that was so bad ass cuntun this its awsome
Kitty chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
You have to write more this is sooo good!
Masuyomi-chan chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
Oh, shi- LAST CHAPTER? HELL NO! PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE THIS PURE, TYPED-UP AWESOMENESS SOOOOOOOOOOON! -crying-
Masuyomi-chan chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Why, oh why, is it so easy to portray Deidara as a little girl? XD I hope you continue this story, cuz it's hilarious and kawaii as hell~
Masuyomi-chan chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
. . . . . . -awkward silence- D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!~ SO CUTE!~ :D
Masuyomi-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
. . . You DO know how much I love you right now, right? I mean, I dinna even see the story, I practically just jumped at the sight of your screenname, nya. For real.
akatsukixhinata101 chapter 4 . 8/18/2010
plzzzz make more I love this story
xXLooney-chanXx chapter 4 . 5/2/2010
ARRGGH you can't just end it that way! It's not right! This was going to be the perfect story, and YOU haven't updated it in two years! Come on, can't you just continue it, if not for one desperate reader?
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