When are you going to post chapter 2?

Do a bell one that would be cool then the rest of the chapters belle too

Chapter 2 ?

Hey Nice where's chappy 2?

i think you've completely vanished into thin air where are you i wanna hear the rest of the story!

hmm... let's see

I like this story for 2 personal reasons:

1. Imma Belleshipper :D

2. I'm not a big fan of long paragraphs(unless they have JUICY details ;)) so i like reading dialogues.

Also, I like the idea of dances(even thought they're not rly original but I always like reading what shipping the author chose and what HAPPENS at the dances[which btw r ALWAYS different in some way])

I'm not very good at grammar and i don't see any grammar mistakes as far as I'm concerned. Also, no typos! except for one i remember seeing which is "Dwn" instead of "Dawn". :D

The only mistakes(which i think are personal ones) are the random make-out session(even though it's rly well written!) and the part when Dawn cries. Those were a bit OOC but i guess they were OK. :)

Keep on writing! Can't wait to write more!

Did you quit this story because I really(10) want to see chapter 2 sometime this winter

hi? Okay, random make-out sessions in this, but keep going.

*drewl* hot story

I love belleshipping! continue writing before i am going to explode!

i'm a huge fan of belle and pearlshipping please write chapter 2

Jessly. Having more than a month in between updates is wrong. Having three is a cardinal sin. So far it's decent, but I can't really TELL with only ONE chapter. So update, mkay?

The fuck? Dawns crying over not being able to shop?...wow

Eclairshipping. -shinyhappyface- I never expected to see any of that here. I applaud you.

ooh, suspense~ I cant wait for the next chapter :D

Aw, she made Dawn cry. /

But anyway, this is really really good so far. Only a couple of grammatical mistakes I saw, so that's not bad. Anyway, great job so far and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep 'em coming!