| Reviews for Unintended Consequences |
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   francis2 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011 Oh. This squeezed my heart, hard. Great great story! |
| helbaffy chapter 1 . 3/12/2009 That was so beautiful! :) Such a great oneshoot! :) |
| RBJ12 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 Wow...you did a great job with the story. I'm speechless...great job! |
| Red-Sox-LaLa chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 *tears* wow, beautifully written |
| Vampire Reader chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Thank you for this very touching story. I'm glad I found it. |
| moonlightfan44 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008 That was so sad! I cried. I can't believe their son had to leave when he was 10 to move in with his grandmother and then dies later on! So sad. Keep going if you want. |
| Joanie chapter 1 . 7/14/2008 That was beautiful. Really well written. Thank you for sharing. |
| moonjat54 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Very well done. The true price of immortality is that you leave loved ones behind. And having a child be the one to lose is really sad. Especially since they had to leave him so early. It did sound like William had a long and happy life. |
| vampirelover987 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Aw, This is so sad, made me cry! Great job :) |
| elwren75 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 How beautifully sad. Your writing is wonderful and painfully poignant. You've really brought up some issues that I think a lot of fans gloss over when the idea of Mick, Beth and children come up. I think there's a reason that, in most vampire lore, vampires can't have children. This is why. Great job. |
| heavenlygrl chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Fantastic, just how I would picture it being; after all, somehow Mick and Beth would find a way to procreate! |
| kschwaab chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 how sad, but beautiful. poor Beth, there can be no pain greater than that of a mother having to bury her child. |
| RandomTVFan30 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Great story. I loved your take on the theme. |
| magialuna chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Very very sad, but beautiful and very well written. Thank you for sharing! |
| p3karen chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 That was so sad, but very well written. |
