It's a bit short, I suppose but it's sweet.

Well done, I think the narration fit Yasu's character very well. It really conveyed the emotions in his own voice. Kudos -

I really do think Yasu would be good with Nana. He doer knMw more about her than Ren does. Great piece, short but good.

Thi is so sad. Im crying too. *Sniff*

I love it. Simple and cute

Aw, it was so beautiful! Nana and Yasu are a good couple, I think that people should pay more atencion to them. Anyways, I really love what you wrote. Congratulations :D

ahh, so sweet, this is one of my favored coupling and it was really kute

This is a really nice story. You managed to portray their feelings :) Good work! Maybe you could make this a series of drabbles? :D