Bloody hell - that was absolutely amazing! I really loved every bit of it, you had me hooked. It flows beautifully, I love the way you intertwined actions with Rose's thoughts during the love scene. I wish I could write as well as you.

SO favoriting this.

This is really interesting, I hope you update this again soon.

loved it!

I am new to Doctor WHo fanfiction...but this is AWESOME! BEautifully written!

This is really good. I love all the tentativeness and uncertainty because of course that would be there but you've managed to acknowledge it and still not lose the sense of hope that is so central to both of them. Really well done.

aw, yay! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE update soon!

That was great. I can't wait for more.

Excellent story so far. I've been wanting to see something like this written. Thanks :-)

That was awesome. Amazing. I can't wait to read the second chapter.

that was beautiful! Really great job! I loved it!

oh, this was great- thanks for the read, fabulous characterization and well, picture-able imagery; plus, good dialogue too- esp. the 'they didn't catch us, and there was cream cakes' line re. running ;D really nice job, keep writing!

Thank you for the happy read! This was well-written and felt quite in-character.

Now that was an interesting and well written piece of writing. Good job!

beautiful, perfect - great job!