I have thoroughly enjoyed this storey. Thank you for posting!

Thanks for writing! I love the Sheplantis elements as well as the snark between RodneyJohn.

I love this story! :)

Good story...looking forward to reading the sequels

Can I just say that you have really done an excellent job of capturing everyone's voice? Cause you have and I can hear each of them speaking in my head without any effort whatsoever. I'm also enjoying the story quite a bit.

Awesome I wonder how the ancients who return would feel or act if they knew about this connection, would they still kick him out or keep him?

My worry was that you were going to create an avatar for atlantis that would have a love interest in Atlantis... that's kind of cool but in a weird context. I like this idea, much, much better! Excellent story!

it was wonderful.. loved it! going straight to my favs.

now we are getting down to the wire.. oooooo

Poor McKay he is jealous.. and as usual John is so flipant about it..

"Okay – yes ... but she started it!".. yep yep, every woman fall for Shep, its just can't be helped.

always learn something new when I read your work.. cool..

love when John's inner geek surfaces.. he is such a math stud.

"As I said ... serious problem." .. yep sounds about right to me.. McKay is so not my fav.. but you can't do a story without him and his mounth!

again with the chap titles.. always sooo intertwined with the plot of the chapter.