I... didn't expect it to end like that. But it was still good, great story.

Opal

Loved, liked, amazing, I...I need a moment, too many emetions, thanks for writing this amazing fic. I love you!

Really enjoyed a Lucky story where Tyki's double persona was explored. I also liked the fact that Lavi wanted Tyki but was resisting because of his own morals and expectations as a Bookman's appprentice. I felt it was very realistic and true-to-character and because of that it captivated my interest more.

i don't know why, but when i went looking for your stories in my alerts they weren't there, so, i got to reread everything, and now, get to comment. :)

love your work, keep it up!

This is now my favourite lucky story.. I just found it and lets just say I couldn't tear myself away from the computere. I just love how you write Lavi

Ah, this is good. – Right now, what he needed was a drink. A perfect way to end the story. Although Tyki says he does not care I think this gives you a certain hint. It shows slightly that maybe all this did throw him off the balance and that he enjoyed it more than he had expected...And that he will try to find Lavi again...hehehe...*claps her hands in delight*

I love interaction between them -it is so nicely deliberated and I really like how Tyki is witty...and smexy :D Details are so good that I have a clear moving picture in my mind...*grins* But what I like here the most is how you manage to keep every little part so interesting.

Muhahha...Lavi just managed to anger Tyki XD I like that detail. It shows that Tyki is not completely invulnerable and that although in chains Lavi can still bite..ah..the drama..:)

Ok, while reading I grinned like an idiot :D I really like the dialogue between them. It has nice flow and every time Lavi sent Tyki to hell I was eager to find out how Tyki reacted. The growing tension between them is done nicely and the reader can really feel the atmosphere. I really like how you managed to portray Tyki. I mean we all know he is awesome, but you put that to words really nicely. The things he do, the staff he says...:) and how he elegantly forces himself on Lavi...hehe :)

I'm fairly unfamiliar with this series, but I really enjoyed your story. (Does that make me an awful person, lol?) The twisted emotions and mindgames were superb, and the entire fic was well-written. Parts of this were heart-wrenching ("I wanted you to understand!"). Excellent work! :D

Utterly fantastic.

God I love this story... Lol both my friend and I were like 'Where's the damn tampons?' XD

I don't really like Lucky pair all that much, but you made me like this story. Thanks and keep up the good work.

Mmm i really wonder if he has no heart...

Very good, i will keep reading now.

Oh rather lovely! I want to know more!

So good.