| Reviews for A Song to the Moon |
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UnfinishedEpilogue chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 Short, but cute. I love them and it's quite hard to find anyone who has an appreciation for their dynamic. |
rabiblack chapter 1 . 7/16/2009 omg i love this, it was amazing i wish their was more lillia/darc fanfics x im trying to write my own and this has really helped thanks |
InfinityFantasy chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 Aw. ) Darc is such a softy on the inside x3 You can just tell. This was totally sweet, I like Darc/Lillia a whole lot better than Kharg/Lillia xD Great job 3 |
Arella Dawn chapter 1 . 2/6/2009 Its a wonderful start. I feel like if you thought of a story you liked to go with this you could add more too it. I would really enjoy it if you did ] Great work! |
wakawaka chapter 1 . 12/29/2008 this is pne of the best iv read so far plz write another like it plz ! |
Pizazz chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 A very refreshing oneshot, and of one of my favourite pairings no less. (Loved it enough to get me to sign in for the first time in...for-freaking-ever I'd say.) What especially stood out to me was Darc's voice in the story; it sounded very much spot on. :3 If I may give a wee bit of a critique, while I enjoyed the style of prose you wrote, you might want to tone down the use of " - " sequences. Some of them were unnecessary and the text looks a little neater without a bunch of dashes breaking it up. It's still a great fanfic! That was really the one thing that came to mind, and even then I don't think it really took away from the actual prose or story. Thanks for a fantastic contribution to the shallow but still growing pool of Darc/Lilia fanfiction. |
FinalFantasyLover007 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008 Darc/Lilia are my favorite couple. I love this story. Excellent job! |
Toki chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 Aw...xD My favourite pairing from this game! Yay! It's been ages since I played the game, but I feel that they are both in character, and I love the way you write them. More, please? |
wakawaka chapter 1 . 7/15/2008 oh this is so good thier so in charater pls write more with this pair pls their not alot of them and it was good |
Lunarspirit chapter 1 . 7/14/2008 that was good I liked it, they were definitely in character to |
ChibiLaryla chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Yay~ DarcLilia fluffy goodness. Thank you very much, it was so cute. |
Sand Fox chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Wonderful work, Foxmagic. I love Darc/Lilia fics, and this is very well written. Though I’d like to see more dialogue. I hope you write another fic soon. Oh, and maybe you could review my Darc/Lilia one-shot? Sincerely, Sand Fox (P.S. I got the first review!) |