lol videl double over in laughter hissing saying that to sayianman i still can't believe that the boy who defeated cell had fought against frieza and majin buu HAD ALMOST GOT YOURSELF KILLED DAMMIT my super sayian think next time had let my dad chase you away because of what i have been waiting wanting my son gohan pounding my pussy with your penis

I thought this was a cute story. I wish it would continue. I like to see how Videl's dad react to seeing Gohan again. Please continue.

Videl hissing to gohan and what s with having me as your gf i love you don t you love me gohan to videl yes I love you

Videl to gohan every king needs a queen

Hahahaha I laughed so much!

Great one shot!

J'aime.

Yet another great oneshot here. Gohan and Videl inadvertently having sex then becoming a semi-legitimate couple makes me happy.

The fact that it's from Videl's point of view makes it both better and worse in my opinion. Better because the it added emotion and kept, obviously, point of view clarity. Worse because we never get a glimpse into Gohan's mind...

The Hercule scene amuses me greatly- Hercule finding Gohan and relative proof that Gohan and Videl had sex then freaking out is totally reasonable, so excellent job there...

Great story.

I look at the grammar, sentence construction, plot, writing style etc. and I like very much. The characterization of Videl especially was very good. It is a situation I can envisage happening and you did it well. It was a great read thank you for it!

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WOW- this story made me smile and laugh. I really enjoyed it!

great story. have you ever thought of a sequel

I need to pee. Ungracefully I park myself at the toilet seat and piss my whole bladder empty. Hmm, it hurts a bit. Funny. Must have kept it inside for far too long. I could hear the hallelujah choir as I release everything. My kidneys are pleased with me again. Might as well also perform a #2. Ahh, it feels like I just got rid of all the toxic in my body. I can finally start the day. It’s a good thing I am the only one in the room, it smells horrible after I take a dump. After I wipe my butt I pull up my sweatpants…

‘No, what if he can smell my poo?’

Great work. Those lines had me cracking up.

Slightly based on true events... Don't hold it against me too much.

I don't since something like that happen to me except I was in Gohan position, and it was the mother who caught us. And I can honestly say nothing happen;)

Oh man. I died laughing.

Crude humor, but I love it.

Darling, I must say, if I could give this any award it would be the 'Most Re-read-able' award. I suppose after reading it several times it is about time to leave a review. Forgive the delay.

Quite amusing in some parts and the awkwardness is enduring but also quite relatable. Unfortunately, in most cases (at least to my experiences) waking up with somebody does not necessarily imply a relationship will follow. This plays on the fantasy wonderfully. Also waking up next to an athlete's body committed to the complete perfection of their art - Oh my goodness, I'm not sure I would let him leave.

Then the after affects, such as Erasa's bantering bring fond memories.

Marvelous