That was awesome. I enjoyed the story and you seemed to have an understanding of some sort on the game and tied it in with the story I think that was a good thing since other fanfiction I've read seemed to have it but didn't understand it (reapers composers things like that). I also love the personality of Joshua and you pretty much nailed it and I like how you added the cat noise that (in my opinion) resembled Joshua as if Joshua never really left/was his protector Neku and how at the beginning Joshua wanted to be a cat and he became one (sort of). In short or summary it was a great fanfiction I really enjoyed it and I ask you to please continue it. You are also quite a skilled writer keep writing. And thanks for writing this.

I couldn't stand not finishing this, so I just had to roll around in my bed trying to get comfortable each time my emotions made me in a way fangasm over this. Speaking of emotions this piece is so wonderful, you are so wonderful making it. The chapter before this one and some before made me cry. I'm glad to say they became happy tears after the ending, but truly nothing really ever does end does it? Everything about your short story was beautiful I just couldn't stop reading it. Thank you so much for making this, and keep it up even if you are done making this story there's always more to tell!

eh...why didnt neku die? _

daw...joshua cat :D and so mean joshua. The story's getting pretty creepy o_o...

ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOV EYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU ILOVEYOUI LOVE YOU!Sorry...heh ummmm... That was amazing!

I'm crying the hardest I have in a long time:.. DAMN YOU JOSHUA... DON'T DIE!

You wrote this chapter PERFECTLY! Great job... As always!

I'm crying hysterically right now !

;A; *sniffles* That was so gooooooood It made me cry!

Thanks for the lovely story. I enjoyed reading every part of it.

This was such a wonderful story and your ending made it even better! I also really love how you made the characters grow and interacted with each other. Simply brilliant.

Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading this. It's been a long time since I've cried from reading a fanfiction, and even longer since I've actually deemed to review one, but this story is worth it.

You know this suspense is killing me! I truly honestly love it, I really do, and I love the suspense! You also have a niice writing style, (something that poor TWEWY needs) and I'd love to read the rest so far, but alas, I'm tired. So I'll leave the rest of this fic for later!

BAAWWW YOU MADE ME CRY ;_;

I... I think your story made my brain go on vacation/drown in the river of my tears because I can't really think of anything to say other than that

IT'S ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL AND ALKSDJASLDJAASJLKASJDLS

There's a few grammar/spelling mistakes throughout, but it's not a big deal and it's probably just my EXPOSED-TO-TOO-MUCH-AWESOMENESS induced head that's having trouble comprehending things right now Q_Q

i'm so sad and happy at the same time, the ending really added such a nice touch.

the character development in your story was really gradual in a nice way. and you certainly know how to present your readers with a thriller. : ))

you write so well, word can't express how grateful i am for finding you and your work! the ending is especially brilliant.

i hope you continue, your work is absolutely addicting :