| Reviews for Nothing Wrong |
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DeanCastiel chapter 1 . 1/29/2009 Aw i relly liked it! I thought Edmund's little speech was beautiful and very true ina way:P This is really a true work of art i rather enjoyed it and it was full of sibling love! It was wonderful! Christine |
Wildfire2 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009 Cool story, I liked it. Little sad but still very good, I can kind of see Edmund rambling like that too. Hope to see you write more. Wildfire |
me and Mr. Jones chapter 1 . 9/4/2008 This story is amazing. And it's is very true, whether it's Aslan's country or heaven or where ever, you have to die to get there. Great telling of how Peter reacted to realizing his brother was going to be ok. great work |
accountdisabled01 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008 That was an amazing oneshot! Truly, truly astounding. I couldn't help myself tearing up at times - fantastic. |
Window2MySoul chapter 1 . 7/29/2008 Wow. That was amazing. I almost thought that Edmund was going to die there. Great 'speech' though. Very powerful. Great job! |
asinine chapter 1 . 7/27/2008 I loved all the "you know?"s! ANd... and... This made me tear up. |
CatsbytheGreat chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Aw, this was such a wonderful story. I could see Edmund taking the time to think this through (as he seems to be the most thoughtful of the Pevensies). There's a great message here too, about how dying is worth it to get to Aslan's Country (or Heaven, however anyone wants to see it.) Great job! |
claire henry chapter 1 . 7/15/2008 That was amazing. How you blended your own oringnal idea with the "The Last Battle" when Peter and the rest of the friends of Narnia met Aslan in His country. truely, an amazing and wonderful fic. |
Bundibird chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Far out, that was good. The fact that i am near speechless really says quite a lot. I loved it! I loved the writing style - very C S Lewishish but with a twist. I liked the "But that is another story" moments. Far out, dude, that was really, really great! I cant even say how much i liked it and that, my friend, is a rarety. GREAT work. Love bundi |
fierypevensie chapter 1 . 7/11/2008 THIS. MADE. ME. WEEP. BY THE BUCKETLOAD. The theme is very timely for what I'm going through in my life now. It's just so beautifully written. thank you. |
Cryssai chapter 1 . 7/10/2008 Gotta love Ed angst! They fit so well together that they deserve a psuedonym. Ednst? Admungst? Angstmund? Well, either way, loved the story. :) Great job. |
KCS chapter 1 . 7/10/2008 Oh, my gosh. It's been a long, long time since I read something that gave me goosebumps, and this did. Bravo, a thousand times bravo! |
Cerulean Musings chapter 1 . 7/10/2008 Oh my gosh. That was...I can't even find the right words. Awesome doesn't even describe this story enough. The characters were believable and I could picture everything that was happening. I wanted to cry with Peter at some times, which is a great accomplishment. Excellent job! ~Crystal |