| Reviews for Vanished Without a Trace |
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   thegrison chapter 2 . 6/28 Failed. It is so stupid in a lot of parts. You really need a beta and co writer to help you. |
| Legalt chapter 2 . 3/1 God, I SINCERELY hope you have learned to stop this weeb crap in the last 12 years. I mean seriously. Gomen? Nani? What the hell man? This is in English, not Japanese. Honorifics are acceptable. Names of techniques are acceptable. Nii-san and Oji as well, but replacing "What" and "Sorry" ? Ughhh So damn cringe and unappealing, especially when you do in fact write much better than most on here... Regardless, I hope you haven't quit writing entirely. Weeb trash aside, you're a good author. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2018 This is so stupid. You had to make naruto the most predictable piece of shite! Oooooooh, you have him a sword, ooohhh he's soooooo scary! You're an idiot. Please remove this crap. |
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 10 . 7/11/2017 interesting fic so far! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
| Rebmul chapter 4 . 4/15/2017 well this was interesting I enjoy seeing cute umi chan but the fic is dead no point in reading more |
| amerdism chapter 10 . 3/21/2016 Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up? |
| bloodysaiyan chapter 10 . 7/6/2015 Dude please finish this I've read it like 5 times please finish it |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 6 . 4/30/2015 WOOT!WOOT! Umihime is a BEAST :) |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 5 . 4/30/2015 So I'm guessing one of these genin is gonna get an artifact. Great Chapter :) |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 4 . 4/30/2015 Great Chapter! Kinda Hoping Naruto Curb Stomps Sasuke :) |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 3 . 4/30/2015 Yay! Umihime-chan is awesome :) |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 2 . 4/30/2015 Love The Dynamic Naruto And Yugito Got Going On :) |
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 4/30/2015 Awesome Start! Poor Ren :( |
| Dios kasu chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 Which details over time... e.e' |
| uscias chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 Please update soon. |
