I would have reviewed this earlier when I favorited it, but I didn't have any time. Anyway, I didn't know about this story before you started rewriting it, so I can't make any comments on the changes, but this is really good. I don't have any criticism for the chapter. Keep up the good work!

THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ

lol that was so funny

Gaara is so cute in this it's like all the other fanfics i rwad they make gaara all evil when he's not really lolz thanks for being different!

Hey :)

You have done a wonderful job with this fic! You haven't gone downhill since you started, but up! Your writing has improved greatly, so don't put yourself down, ne?

:)

Can't wait to read more! I really like the way you are changing perspectives to show the lifestyles of the different characters.

I just have one question though: Why is the fic called Untitled?

Other than that, GREAT WORK!

Keep it up :)

See you next time

-Dancer-

GO Gaara, GO Gaara! Lol. What a wicked chapter! Even though you have changed perspective into the third person, you have still managed to keep the style of writing the same and continue to write at a fantastic level. Well done!

Keep it up :)

-Dancer-

LOL what a cool chapter. It was short, but to the point :)

Great work, keep it up.

-Dancer-

What a wicked chapter! I personally like Sasuke better than Naruto, but Naruto is still awesome!

I really like the song/poem thing in the middle of the chapters and what's it there for (explained in AN). It's something I've never thought of before :)

And you're right, this story IS well written. You've improved so much since the first chapter! -claps loudly-

Keep up the fantastic work :)

-Dancer-

Whoot! Another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens with Sasuke and Naruto in future chapters :)

-Dancer-

Hay there! So sorry it took so long to review :)

Anyways, what a great chap! Loved the change in perspective and the insight into a different person's feelings and thoughts.

Great work, keep it up!

-Dancer-

You should make the chapters longer... but other than that great job!

I was reading the trip over kitten line and accidemtally read it as trip over kitchen and i was like wtf, yeah it's too early for me to be alive right now *nervous laughs* great chap. but I'm still curious as to why they had to climb the tree but i suppose all things will be anwsered in good time

you know as i read these story i get sad for sasuke, even tho he is a prick, its still sad 'cause of all the bad things that happen to him... naruto's side of the story makes me smile and sad at the same time... just keep up the good work, because i think that the mixture of sad n funny makes it really good...

i know i left ya a review earlier n they r probably back to back... but, what can i say... i like ur story!

sound like an interesting story.. plz upload more whenever ya get a chance...

Hay! Great start to the fic :) Some spelling mistakes, but they'll be easy to fix. Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to chapter two!

-Dancer-