nice so far

yay red has teen problems yay.

Finally had the time to read this, I hope that you are planning on finishing this.

cool story so far

Could make the chapters a tinsy bit longer though the suspence is killing me

Update soon

This is good! Please Update Soon!

f#ing awesome! i want, no, scratch that, i NEED to know how its going on!

...It takes you FOREVER to update...AND IT'S A CLIFFHANGER? 'shakes fist angrily' Still...It's a good chapter...So I won't hurt you...'looks at flamethrower'...No need for this anymore...

Your writing is really improving :)

I liked how solid this chap felt and the diaogue seemed very natural.

keep up the good writing!

This is great! You've got all of the characters' personalities and actions down PERFECTLY. Please tell me how you did this, because I can't get the characters right! *smashes head on wall out of anger*

Anyway,*rubs head* please continue writing.

I AM SO PROUD OF YOU! This was great, PM me if you need any help!

The fact that rabid canines were sent intentionally perks my interest, and what they want with Max is beyond me...can't wait to read more.

Kit

i really like this story i can't for the next one hellboy rule !

*grin*

I liked the boy scout line.

And look you actually updated :p

Hellboy was done very nicely, you've got the mannerisms down pat. As was the Manning/Hellboy interactions.

I just happen to have the sinking feeling Maxwell Demone will be a horribly annoying and cliche OC. Please prove me wrong.

-Jinx Author

Continue says I. ONWARD TO THE ENDING!

AWAY!

*quack*

...YAY! Finally, some paranormal action! Great job!