| Reviews for Love Octagon |
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sinegas22 chapter 2 . 4/5/2018 all 27! |
Please chapter 2 . 7/14/2014 Don't abandon this it's amazing i like you have to update HIV us chapter two please |
mogu95 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010 we! L27 is there gonna be Bel27? *puppydog eyes* |
SayaChan1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009 me: 0: hibari is Jealous! D -cute smile- *is about to get tonfas'ed but dodge before he can hit* me: Hibari you cant hide the truth*dodge* WOAH! i luv this story please write chaptor 2 D: With love from M.B.C x3 |
Jaricchi chapter 1 . 10/17/2008 guahahahaha! great-o! |
Ila Way chapter 1 . 10/9/2008 Please do continue! xD Hibari ish jealous...? *gets tonfa'd by Hibari* I... so.. sorry... *dies* anyway please continue xD |
Chapppyy chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 yayy i wanna see an 8059 pairing up XD update and YES! finally a lambo fic XD i need to search up more _ D |
Lady Serena Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 Hmm...intriguing idea. Yogurt eh? *takes out yogurt with evil gleam in eyes* Just because you're slacking off on your other stories doesn't mean you're slacking off on this one right? RIGHT? *smirk* Update soon...or else. |
Alice Melan chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Wow, what a great beginning. |
HappyDuckyDay chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 OMG I was just about to begin writing a fic like this! I was just looking through some for details I should work on. _ It was going to be based on the episode where Tsuna gets hit by the 10 yr bazooka. From there it would be love (in order) with the people he met. But now after seeing the idea I had taken I guess I'll just look for something. *shrugs* Oh well. By the way if you ever want to a collab for this or need help don't hesitate to ask me cause I wouldn't mind _ Email: |
Sparkling-Ruby Gem chapter 1 . 7/10/2008 Interesting beginning, a little short for my taste but a good beginning. I think you need to read over your chapter a little because there are a few easily fixed grammer mistakes. Also the flows a little weird and it confuses me a bit. I'm trying to figure out where they went. I know they left Tsuna's house but did they go to Namimori because Hibari shows up (and we all know that hunky dork lives in the school :]) Anyway, all in all it's a very amusing summary, a very interesting beginning with a pairing not seen a lot, and a lot of promise. Just needs to fix some of the mechanics...and make it a bit longer, ne? :] Hope to read more. |
MinusOne chapter 1 . 7/9/2008 *cheshire grin* So far, you're off to a good start! - Update soon! I'm anxious to see where you're going with this! Reverse Harem! YAY! Banzai! - Ja Matta NE! C.A.W! The one and ONLY! _~ |
Cielo-negro chapter 1 . 7/9/2008 Oh my~ I certainly want to know what happened~ (and see Tsuna getting molested~) |
Rae-chan33 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008 wo! *hold up AdultLambo27 flag* I NEVER get to see that pairing! I like it! |