You're a good girl, Alex but I still hate your guts. #TeamMello

"Some nice big fat ones. Relax him so much that he doesn't wake up again." lmao

Thank you, I have now successfully learned Pig Latin. I think. Olcoay? Did I do that right? It's supposed it say 'cool'...

Ive probably read this about.. 5 times? Such and awsome (and humorous) story! It's my absolute FAVORITE out of all the Matt and Mello series I've read.

But I still skim over what Alex says.. She still makes me angry lol.

Anywho...

I just really love how you keep Mello in character. He's not all lovey dovey like some I've read. He's just right! Haha, anyways, keep up the work. I like your writing style..

Crimson

Even though alex was not a mean bitch character...I still kinda hated her.

Even though alex was not a mean bitch character...I still kinda hated her.

that was great! loved it! :O

loved it.

this is unbelievable. i'm happy i found this story, for you made me laugh so hard and then think and consider things i haven't thought about yet regarding the DN universe.

first, i thought both mello and matt are a little ooc and matt having a girlfriend? that's -as mello would say- ridiculous ;) but the more i read, the more you convinced me that you fully grasped their characters - and more so than i ever did. i had to admit that your matt is the closest to what we know about him from "how to read" that i've come across so far; a laid-back, not-caring-about-the-world's-troubles, anti-social geek. and mello surprisingly stays mello even with the immense change he's got to go through in this fic. some lines are just epic and i love this fic for all it is. thank you for writing this :)

This was such a well developed story...

I really like the twists that it took on, and the shape of the plot.

Thanks for writing such an awesome story for us all~!

Oh, effing God, I love Mello :)))

Great story so far!

xYourDearlyBeloved

Oh my. I absolutely loved this. Your Mello voice was positively perfect. (: Very very nice.

That was fun.

Keep writing,

Italy

Wow!

It was a great fanfic! When I saw you paired an OC with Matt I thought

"Oh hell no.."

but I was alredy too much into the fic to just stop reading it xD

Well yes, Alex was a good girl after all. :)

And It had lots of yaoi *w* ~

However Hope you'll continue writing fics like this one *o*

Take Care

PD: Forgive my mistakes~ My english sucks xD ~

this was such a good story! it really captured mello and his obsessive pissy attitude, i knew he would realize sooner or later he didn't want to share matt, ever. i loved it it was wonderful even without the straight lemon, write more, please? *puppy dog eyes*