Reviews for Bus Tickets
ClearMortality chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
I'm not sure if it was done on purpose, but at one point in the chapter, there were a series of 0's before the word "because". I have a feeling it's a mistake so I thought I'd point it out.

Other than that, the chapter was absolutely amazing.
Mei Chan is Random chapter 26 . 2/7/2014
They're so cute.
jayfeather-is-awesome chapter 26 . 12/7/2012
HI! I realize you haven't updated this in a while, long while, but are you going to update any more chapter? I love this story very much and love your writing style .
Eru-chan chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Really cute! They're definitely in character! XD
ernestjaramillo23yahoo.com chapter 26 . 9/29/2010
I remember reading this along time ago and it still gets to me every time i read it. Great job.
youdidwinsodidi chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Hi hello, I read your story a long time ago, and recently I stumbled on a new pairing which would suit PERFECTLY with your story.. so I wondered if you would mind if I rewrote the story with Kyuhyun & Sungmin as charachters, I'll credit you the whole story long, I'll be putting it on Livejournal and I'll link to the original story, and I'll send you the link and so. I'll be wiating for your reply! ~ ありがとう御座います
nyanja14 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Haha, I actually read this story ages ago, but I just wanted to let you know that this fic has inspired me and my best friend to take a bus trip of our own this spring break. We started contemplating this back early in the story's creation, but now it's looking like it might actually happen. Thank you!
SpookyMuffin13 chapter 26 . 12/27/2009
I love your story so much, its definitely one of my favorites! Also, thank you for always writing down the names of the songs you use, I have found some interesting music that way!:) please update soon!
yugiL chapter 26 . 11/11/2009
I love this fic!

Everything about this fic!

The characterization, the interactions, the drama~

*swoons*

Are you gonna add any more extras?

You're and amazing writer~! Thank you for writing something so awesome!
GreenAppleIce chapter 26 . 10/27/2009
Yay, Kuro-companion piece! . Haven't read Lolita or Dracula, but I should someday since they're like classics. I'm very pleased with this extra as well. I mean, Kurogane is already hot on a normal basis, but bruised up? (swoons) It's nice seeing how he started his journey, and I like how you end with Tomoyo's letter. (gasp) You're getting married! Kyaa! I know this is really late, but congratulations and good luck! I'm so happy for you, and I wish you all the best! .
GreenAppleIce chapter 25 . 10/27/2009
Ooh goody, extras to soften the blow of an excellent story ending. So that's what the mashed potatoes thing is all about (nods in understanding) Well, I'm really glad that Fai ran away and found the person who makes him smile . Must remember to look you up on fictionpress one day...
GreenAppleIce chapter 24 . 10/27/2009
Oh my. Among other things, I must remember to avoid drinking as much as possible; I bet I'm one of those people that can't hold their alcohol/get nasty hangovers XD I hear that drinking water helps :D Ooh yes, they both should model! Then I can fangirl over them even more (drools). Kyaa! Kyaa! TRC KuroFai! I totally did not see that one coming. Very nice! . And even better, they're all lovey-dovey with each other! "So?" Ha ha ha, such a typical Kuro-wanwan reaction XD I was laughing so hard at that XD I bet this Kurogane and Fai really are cute compared to the sexy/pretty/hot TRC versions. Still, it's great to see TRC KuroFai so happy together . Hee hee, I bet the sex really is amazing XD I've never really been a fan of chick-flick moments, but there are always exceptions, and this definitely qualifies. What a sweet ending :) Speaking of endings... (bawling some more) I can't believe this is over already T.T This fic was definitely worth the journey, and I absolutely loved it!
GreenAppleIce chapter 23 . 10/27/2009
Oh good, not the last chapter then (sighs in relief) Ashura (sniff) Okay, now I don't hate him as much anymore. Wah, so much significance in the unpacking (darn English instincts); it's great that Kurogane is finally settling down (and with Fai!), and it's even more great that they're no longer alone :) Kyaa, Fai said it! I think it's really fitting that he just says so casually. Poor Kurogane must've had one heck of a shock XD Ooh, me wanna see that picture of baby Kurogane! Ha ha, First Mate Dense (snickers) Haven't heard that before XD And of course, what kind of welcoming party would it be if there was no alcohol :) It was really fun to read about drunken Fai; I'm surprised he didn't start meowing XD Now why would Kurogane want to have those types of dreams when he could have the real thing? :D Too bad their sparkly moment (heh heh) got interrupted, but that's so like Fai to pass out XD Troublesome yes, but still lovable .
GreenAppleIce chapter 22 . 10/27/2009
Note to self- remember to read Nabari No Ou one day when I have time (which is not gonna be soon T.T) I totally agree with you on Camp Rock- it was HORRIBLE (shudders) I regret watching it. Anyways, on to the actual review. Yay, cuddling first thing in the chapter. Wonderful, wonderful... . Kuro-tan is so sweet, enduring the song like that even though he felt stupid. Lucky Fai :) I've never heard the song, but I really like Fai's interpretation of it; I guess KuroFai does indeed fit it. And here's even more proof of Kurogane's love- he takes Fai shopping . Ha ha, I guess I'd better start looking for a stronger word than 'hopefully.' Fai probably looks good in the designer suit (swoon) as well as the hobo-ish outfit XD Ooh, but shirtless Fai is even better! "Do these pants make my butt look big?" Too cute XD (gasp) I wanna go to the beach too, especially if those two are there :D I found it really interesting that Kurogane's the one to wear blue and Fai's the one to wear red since it's normally the other way around. But I like it this way too- it's like they're a part of each other :) And the kissing was so SWEET! (fangirling) KuroFai kissing without any angst is definitely the best . Only one more chapter? (sob) No D:
GreenAppleIce chapter 21 . 10/27/2009
Gah, I've been away from here so long that I've forgotten how much I love this! (glomps) Okay, time for some reviewing. I kinda like this Fai; it's nice to see him not push Kurogane away immediately after they kiss. Of course, shy/needy Fai is just plain adorable. Yay for cuddling, and double yay for crossdressing! . Ah, I'd love to see Fai wearing that dress, even if Kurogane will probably kill me XD I don't suppose Tomoyo took a picture? :D "Like the kid who doesn't get the sex jokes the adults tell at Thanksgiving after a few bottles." Ha ha, very fitting description XD Unlike Tomoyo, I don't think I'd do a very good job of restraining my fangirl instincts at a scene like that (squealing). But I do feel a little sad for Kurogane having to wait for Fai :( That conversation about the meaning of true strength is one of my favorite parts of the Nihon arc, and I'm so happy that you included it here . It really is hard to forget that Tomoyo is so young sometimes since she seems to be so wise beyond her years. And naturally there must be angst to accompany the wonderfulness of KuroFai. That part where Kurogane's forcibly holding Fai made me want to start crying, yet I couldn't help but to love it. I did kinda start laughing at Kurogane's Fai-like inner voices though. Wah, Fai's room sounds so grand O.o I wanna hire Tomoyo to decorate my room :D Alright, more cuddling, hurt and comfort, and a CONFESSION! Hyuu, go Kurogane . I have no personal experience with confessions, but I feel that Kurogane's mini-speech is something that he would actually say when confessing. And of course I liked it :)
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