| Reviews for The return |
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   RCWilkz chapter 9 . 5/19/2017 I believe the easiest way to pronounce Beta would be Bay-tah... The e makes a hard A sound, whereas the a makes a soft aa sound. Although, most people can understand if it is pronounced the way it looks (bet-ah) or any variation thereof. On another note, I love this story. I like Lin's progression from canon to this story because it is not outside the realm of possibility and gives him more depth. Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/13/2015 Wow! That's all I have to say! The end was extremely cute! Loved it. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/12/2015 Lin is like a very nice, awesome kind uncle that everybody loves. He is also very handsome and charming. ; ) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2015 Oh God! Poor Mai-chan! Naru you dumb Mai does not love Gene. She loves you duh! u.u |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2015 I loved yhis story, but Mai was so troubled when she saw the SPR van that she forgot her friend LOL |
| Shadow chapter 9 . 9/26/2014 That was really good! It was shorter than some of the other in depth ones I've read and it had all of the awesomeness you could possibly smash into it. Great job! still saw some errors, buuuuuuuuuuut, that's mainly because I'm an English major and I'm picky XD But I'm really glad you shared this idea with us. You also put a very believable amount of "non-romance" in it but still add that little bit of it at the end that was probably the most in character as the original. Awesome! Thanks again for sharing and Happy Writing! |
| AmyNChan chapter 1 . 12/1/2013 Yay! The returning is awesome! |
| Mhelai chapter 3 . 10/17/2013 Eer.. Theres a mistake in here. Bou-san know how to drive and he's the one whose driving the van everytime theyre going on location. Ayako, on the other, doesnt have a car nor know how to drive. |
| NaginiFay chapter 9 . 8/1/2013 This was very good. In case no one has let you know yet, beta is pronounced either beh-tah or bay-tah. |
| duchessme chapter 8 . 7/27/2013 eh?the end? Too bad its quite interestng and well-written |
| Cheesepuffs chapter 4 . 8/13/2012 This story is amazing. It's hard to find good ghost hunt fan fiction. I haven't read the manga... But most of it you can inturprete from reading fanfics. Thanks for making this, hopefully you make many more in the future. :) |
| kekedia chapter 9 . 8/18/2011 Hey, really thanks, I loved your fic! |
| angel chapter 9 . 12/30/2010 .GOOD iloveit |
| Adcloud chapter 9 . 11/11/2010 I really love it.. one of of the best gh fanfiction ever... haha... looking forward to ur future works... gambatte.. |
| Brooke chapter 5 . 7/14/2010 I realy liked this chapter,and the last chapter as well things got exciting,happy,sad,and so much happened. I have also liked how Mai-san and "Naru"-kun have gotten a little closer. ;/3 Can't wait for the next chapter! :D - Brooke |
