I loved the story! please please please make a sequel!

You Definatly should write a sequal this is so good :) I loved it :)

I can't believe that I never reviewed this story! How awful of me!

But now that I think of it, you did email it to me and I didn't read it here.

Wow, I'm so proud of you for finishing this. I can't believe that this story was - what, five years in the making? I can't believe that we've been friends for so long! I love you, my dear. You're the best.

Ali

aw i loved this story! mush is awesome! please please please please write a sequel!

now that was good. i was considering stopping reading when i heard her name was sprite but only because that's my nickname. i am definitly impressed.

-I.S.

Sequal, SEQUAL! Do you even have to ask? Of course we want a sequal! This is a brilliant, beautiful story. It's well written and sweet. And you want to know if we want a sequal. This is like JK Rolwling or Stephiane Myer saying "I wrote a story.

Want another?" Uh, YES! Girl, I love your story! I love your writing style, I feel like I'm there and I love all the characters that I met and got to know better. I can't wait for more!

Oh. My. Gosh. BEST CHAPTER EVER! Seriously I am in love with this story! (I say that a lot but I always mean it) Seriously there needs to be a sequel or a prequel or something!

Ali

i love it! it was amazing, i saw it in my email and practically jumped out of my seat with excitment...i was in the library...so yeah. You've exceeded my expectations of the story: at first i thought it was cute but now, it's so much more than that, thank you for taking the time to finish it and if you do a sequel i think a number of people would be more than happy :-) you're an amazing writer, keep it up!

NEWSIESxLUVR -

I really enjoyed your story. do try and do a sequal, it doesn't matter howlong it takes,I've been working on one since 8th grade and am just now getting it to work on 's 16 years. So keep at it, you're doing a great job.

Ashley

LOVE the story SO VERY VERY MUCH! You have to write a sequel NOW! And don't take forever I'm impatient (lol)! I LOVE your writing SO much I can't even tell you!

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write the sequel, and soon!

Peace out,

Joker

Aw! That was AWESOME! That was the best Newsies story I've read! :) Thanks for posting it for everyone's enjoyment!

I loved the story! I think the ending was really good. There is definetly enough to do a sequel here, but if you don't want to you don't have to. I know I wouldn't want to wait four more years to see how everything turns out for everyone. Good job though the story was done really well. You should be proud of it.

Stupid Tart. Poor Sprite and Mushy...

AH! Poor Sprite. Why does she always have to overhear the wrong things... lol

pah-lease update soon! wow, okai, it's way to late to write please that many times...lol but for real, i LOVE this story! pwease!