Reviews for TFM 5: The Unending Odyssey
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 8 . 3/25
I wish you would continue this and see how they get out of the time field with there memories intact.
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 1 . 3/24
Ok just finished T5M Part2 and now on part 5 what happened to parts 3 and 4. ?and will you be continuing part 5 or maybe a rewrite to fix things, add to what is already existing to make the chapters longer. One can hope
Guest chapter 8 . 11/27/2019
I'm really, really enjoying this fic! I know it's been many years since you've updated this story, but I hope that you haven't given up on it. I just found this story and won't stop checking if there's an update. Please keep up the wonderful writing.
KnowInsight chapter 8 . 8/29/2019
I enjoyed what was written
The Dark One Rising chapter 8 . 10/14/2018
Well, that was nice. Off to to read the omakes, I guess.
The Dark One Rising chapter 4 . 10/14/2018
I am mildly surprised that they aren’t together by now. It’s almost two years past TF2. We’re TF3 & 4 going to cover one season each? They already seemed to be getting quite close by the end of what you had written for TF2. I suppose they were only “friends”, but even Sam’s relatives presumed that they would get together.
The Dark One Rising chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
...I was not expecting that end part, with the opening credits.
DirewolfShadowFox chapter 8 . 5/31/2014
Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
TOWTWUKER chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
1. cams horny for sam

2. evil little cliffy
Rydan fall chapter 8 . 6/17/2012
I still think this could have been done differently, especialy in canon.

Might I be so crude to point-out the fact that Stargates can transport a energy beam, as seen in several episodes?

The Asgards know how to make stargates, what this means is that they could make a stargate to redirect the energy beam towards a dead world or if your evil, a black hole.

Since they dont have the room to put armor plates around certain machinery, in order to shield them, what about energy-shield-tech?

I mean, if it can protect your ship from harm, it should be able to do that as well.

Since they wouldnt want the Ori to go to Earth, while following them, why not going to Pegasus after breaking out of this predictiment?

There happen to be two cityships out there that might be of use, one that is basicaly a flate plate with one tower left and without any energy, while the other is still intact, yet has almost no energy.

This all is without even calculating in the possible oppertunity the Asurans give with their cityships.

Why am I thinking "Go-Away-Beams" & "Grand Theft Spaceship"?

As for the Phase-shift, what about making a phase-shifted corridor in the ship?

That way the beam would pass harmless true the ship while they take out the attacking Ori-warship.

Goauld transpoter rings might help with the field effect.

But another option would be to phase-shift the incoming Ori energy attack.

As for getting away from the ship, how much room is there in both hanger-decks?

Two small ships that togeter form a bigger ship might be possible.

Think living section plus cockpit and FTL-drive plus weapons, both having STL drives that will double their joined STL speeds thanks to carefully selected positions of the STL drives.

FTL section in the tail, crew section in somekinda side mounted engine pods.

There are options, including using the hanger-bays to house new reactor and FTL drive systems with proper shielding.

One thing you could do, is instead of mounting certain stuff vertical, to mount them horizontal.

Heck even using the time-delaysion(?) field on a lower setting would help, since there must be a max output of that Ori warship its energy canon, a day or so to recharge the energe/delaysion(?) field to full 100% charge could already let them break out without anybody the wiser.

Heh, by projecting a counter delaysion field inside the ships crew quarters, they themself wouldt be effected to the temperal age-ing.

Would even let them plow straight true the Ori warship without even dropping their own ship its shields below 99.9%.

As for the hull, Im going by the impritation that the delaysion goestrue the shield grid emmiters.

Use portable ones to extend or alter the overal shield shape and apply certain hanger-bay and planetary shields underneed it for the needed hull alterations.

Suggest a hull alteration into sommething like this.

: slash slash www dot phpbbplanet dot com slash shipyard slash viewtopic dot php?p59593&mforumshipyard#59593
bill560682 chapter 8 . 6/9/2012
now if i were the one writting this i would have them send everything they learn back with teal'c in the show it does not tell that. i mean danail spent like 50 years decoding acaint or asgard or whichever it was an as far as we know that did not make it to the past.
Malix2 chapter 8 . 12/26/2011
Wow, great series here. :) I rather liked how harry's magic was limited, many authors make the mistake of having whatever character they introduce fix every single problem almost single-handedly. Although even that is entertaining, I rather enjoy that actually, but I enjoy the subtle thing too. Especially since the subtle thing is easier to keep going, when they do the overpowered thing where they give them advanced technology beyond anything else it kinda paints them into a corner since the enemies would be easily defeated. Still, I do rather like the fics where they combine magic and technology to make stuff that totally pwns. Heck, I wouldn't really mind if they swatted the enemies down like flies, as long as they kept coming up with cool stuff. Heck, even the fics that are post SGA where they combined the asgard and alteran databases and create a... empire doesn't sound like the exact right word, anyway, those are still good, even if they don't have any major bad guys to blow up, and it's mostly political problems which can't be solved with brute force, which counteracts them having all that advanced technology.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/23/2011
wonderful story!

please update soon!
ratyup chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Chapter one. Possible correction: "When the ship settled into a stable high geo-stationary orbit," perhaps change geo-stationary for geosynchronous.
Blackholelord chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
Nice chapter, but will the romance between Harry and Sam take off eariler, or develop in the final Stargate SG-1 movie?
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