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Debbie Hicks chapter 6 . 5/8/2018 7. Bella's Alien history Bella from the depth od the Underworld sighten Edward theen ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Bitten m y both then suicked blood with best frien ds then became haedest but strongest but marble ice cold then all of the sudden a most powerful en egety had Sedu ced Edwaerd via Sexual desires via ppwes exploding glowing then was not human anymore weas acting more strangely then was really hunbgry for him was a Succubui a human born Vampire then suddenly too laaate Bitten Edweard deeeply then turned him as the very first m ale Succebui in histo with them then too late with him with the others with imprints an d with child with both with the Vulcan s drained Volturi found m e guilty theen Tore from us/them then blowen thenbroken from here then as all of of them AExecuted from here thern bleding with a ruptured appenix was dying then then too late Venom stranded but trapped as all of Alice oh m y god she's clod by now you die with them murdered from here Atomized b ut still had Venom then then too late tore from heere Alice she's not normal ouch Bella you are mine Husband forever bound to me Ripped then with implanted kids followed then b rought here then the dasmages to my health was dying from the bruising two cracked one crunched thing they need to be changed then too late eexploding then then with tem then too late blown freely were as all of them then explodijng brought here were as all of we report they hold a succibui with child dead are drained of as all of blood bring them then suddenly myself had eight kids weere brtids were different then myself did look different my fiery throat was murderous AAlicer her skin is now toucher harder but ice-cold oh god I Need to kill gasp Edward she took my katra from me so myself m arked her with them Well Bells you are not normal first act human then too late popped from the pole bodies b rought here she was born not human had kids hunts as all of them used enggry and her gift is activated but blew them feeeeeely good then we sentenced them to death as all of them but smashed freely they can't die then as all of them blacking out this on e not yours guilty as charged EXTINCT! From here then scram ig then BLAZED! From here without as all but things as all of them With more burnt from here then then Charried from here then were as all of them Destroyed from here cursed us/as all of them from the livijg nowe brought here successfully done good then too late killed now bound to our boarding school forever trapped then a Cartoon from on e Dorm was from Bree Tanner enrolled was with me I Through to be wary I Venture to be someplace scary I Turn Loose GHOSTLY HAUNTS! BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! IT'S SHOWTIME! Ugh Deathly Vu cracking violent storms then too late us/them were glowing sighten from the viewscreen BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Nails began flaring then suddenly they yelled planetary names but nuked were as all of them brought here but had as all of them freed of were around the world's youth/young then too late brought here then had them wiped out with aliens both with the Vulcans then too late hybrids's as all of them corpses brought here forbidden hunting then blown rest few and rest an d remains with few last and finalist ones ripped from tore freely then too late brought here then no longer here used my powers fainted of my history was Bene Gesserit was not human anymore Madam Captain she's not normal Bella yes you were taught/trained by us/them are not humans urgh altered my own age Carlisle about her she's not human is trained/taught/schooled in the ways of a Bene Gesserit adept yes now it came myself was not norm al but healed had recovered faster than normal Ew! your eyes are CGI Blue within blue from these yes Bree I Look like from the planet Arrakis it's m y Fremen diet myself held up my crysknife I Won't allow you to harm my tribe of this sietch gasp she's carrying some mind My Grandmother passed I Cried tears given waters of the dead it's a prophecy a woman has powers two Vulcan males with other both Thanks Mom no problem from NASA Bodysuit Momma mia she's toned from sports yes Fremen fashion myself tried speaking in the dialects Vulcan it worked with Fremen dialects mixed what good god Woman that's weird uh oh Bree sensed danger smelt it so do I Was trained so they sorry wee have to guard we are doing a ritual from the book series on Arrakis lifestyle on a alien planet go the bathroon Bells then stepping out dressed like this my hair long still holding my crysknife was sharp but very deadly wearing a belt and Sandals other hand with a Padd studying Momma mia oh my god what this Fremen clothes from here from bodysuits from NASA Yes oh god our muscles cracked like this oh m an you are handsome me nah that Retired for night blowen freely were as all of as all of them as all of them sank then too late the bodies were as all of most brought here killed n ow preserved then wen t oldest of the three then aged Oh no not him ACK! 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LoveMaddy chapter 6 . 8/20/2009 update soon! |
LoveMaddy chapter 4 . 8/20/2009 great chap! |
LoveMaddy chapter 3 . 8/20/2009 haha esme being all wierd |
LoveMaddy chapter 2 . 8/20/2009 awesome! |
LoveMaddy chapter 1 . 8/20/2009 wow very good! very original to! |
Devil Nightmare chapter 6 . 4/28/2009 Can't wait for more and I'm guessing Jake saves her anyway hope to get more soon P |
bunii chapter 5 . 3/23/2009 Any chance of another chapter coming soon? |
whitezcar chapter 5 . 3/14/2009 The ending has me a bit confused.. please update soon! |
Devil Nightmare chapter 5 . 1/27/2009 What does the Gotcha mean! I hope Edward feels the same well bella does I hope he will take care of her and love her oh and be protective of her so now she is a vampire? Want more a lot more asap P |
Mindrea chapter 4 . 12/20/2008 I can't WAIT until the next chapter is up! |
Mindrea chapter 1 . 12/20/2008 Very good! But how come you haven't updated in a while? |
Reaching Out chapter 4 . 10/10/2008 Hmm.. what is Eddie thinking? |
TwilightEternity017 chapter 4 . 10/5/2008 ahh omg rly intersting chapter you wrote like the cliffie is major...the story is really great i cant wait to keep reading more..i wonder what wil happen on the coffe date and everything else...hopes to read more soon awesome job |
TwilightEternity017 chapter 3 . 9/10/2008 awesome story..i like it alot i can't wait to keep reading..that is kinda a cliffie you left hanging there which is making me wonder what happenes next..hope to read more soon keep up the great writing..oh btw your new word is funny lol |