Love it

Good Story wish you would have had an ending for dinozzo that ending was left in the air maybe you could have Ziva leave Rivkin to go back to Tony

Hey:)
I know you last updated this like 5 years ago but I just wanted to say that I really loved it and you are a great writer! Hope you are still writing! Have a nice day!

Please write more! I have just read this from start to finish and it is amazing. I am sorry I haven't commented on the others bit they were equally good. Please keep writing.

Hey sorry i know you probably did this ages ago but i've just finished it and thought i ought to say that it was really cool - i especially liked the fire bit! Have you written anything else?

Thanks

lol 'How did baby get in mommy's tummy?' LMFAO! m sure we all asked or thought that when we were little! just thought they appeared or that hospitals handed the out like cookies or flyers.

this story was good.

aww cant believe its over. loved it though

Haha I 3 it! Its so cute! I loved reading this (even though I've got in trouble multiple times for reading a little too much...) Anyways, loved the whole story! It was awesome!

Well now you have to do a follow up, you cannot just leave Ziva's story wide open like that.

you haven't been enthused by the amount of reviews? 200 reviews it good for a story of this kind. McAbby is a tough topic only cause there are far more Tiva shippers out there but I think it's actually quite rude that you would insult your loyal reviewers by saying that you expected more reviews, wetness you claim to be writing for yourself or not. because if you seriously were writing for yourself, you would not even mention the reviews

Ah, sorry about me not reviewing earlier, anyway, here I am, so...The three last chapters were great as always, of course and the character interaction was too and everything was well written!

Abby gave birth to a baby girl, awe, that’s so cute! Poor Ziva/Tony though, that scene at the end of chapter 24 was really sad, and her life with that Rivken guy sees awful, Tony is a way better match for her!

Great ending btw, kudos! Cannot wait to read a possible follow up one-shot, so keep them coming, eh, just kidding, take your time!

I don't like Ziva with Rivken, but good story... I really enjoyed reading it

Absolutly loving this story! Write more soon! Wit lots of tiva!

That was a really good sum up. If I were Ziva I would divorce Michael and go back to Tony. I can't wait to see what other stories you have written.