What happens? I liked how it was grind baby and she was reluctant to tell them snd I would have liked to see that play out

More please ! :)

I've been looking for the community Three is a company too, but can't seem to find it would you be able to help me?

Oh AMY God. Update. Now! Please? with Sugar on top?D

OH. MY. GOD... I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ENDED IT THERE! UPDATE SOON OR I'LL CRY! :'(

Great work by the way! Love the story and the whole idea!

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OH SNAP!

this shit right here is getting fucking inTENSE

WO I FUCKING LOVE IT!

update soon. :D and trust me... I know how hard high school is.

It makes me want to weep. AHAHAHAH not really.

Okay maybe. Sometimes.

...

ssh...

anyways. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!

YEE-FREAKING-HAW!

Okay This story is great and everything and I even really like how Hermione and Draco and Harry are like, alovers and stuff (although coming from the actually story plot of the series, it would make more sense if it was Ron isntead of Draco, but you are just making things dramatic which is alright with me, since your story is fabulous anyways) But i SERIOUSLY cannot deal with the Draco/Harry pairing. Like that kiss. It was like.

ihfdskdsfkj!

It blew my mind. I wasn't prepared for it. Lol

Although a few cha[ters back when they came waltzing out of the room buck naked had me cracking up almost as much as hermione. CAN YOU LIKE... PICTURE THAT HAPPENING IRL? THE DUDES FROM THE MOVIES!

LOLOLOLOL

no

not really. It scares and intrigues me at the same time.

At any rate I liked this chapter.

DUN DUN DUN! The plot THICKENS!

Can't wait to read the next chapter. BOY I SURE WAS LUCKY FINDING A STORY LIKE THIS THAT ALREADY HAS 33 CHA{TERS UP!

Even if they ARE like really really ridiculously short chapters.

...

Not that I'm complaining or anything!

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

*flies away Superman Style*

I love it! Please please please continue soon!

Great cliffy! I'm really enjoying this story so far. Please update soon.

love it love it!

cant wait for more :)

I'm sorry! I'm so sorry for a late review! I've had work experience, parties, actual work and the worst flu all week, and I just haven't found time to read, review or anything! This is the first time I've been on my computer in a week and a half!

Okkay, enough with my excuses, what about this double update! Well, considering the first one was a remake of the original chapter because you and I both agreed the first version lacked drama and thrill. So now I tip my hat to you on accomplishing that.

And the same goes for this chapter. I mean, more drama on how to stop Narcissa and the rescue of Hermione. More description, more passion in the words - that's what writing is all about! And you sacrificed good Pansy! Sorry for being a bit joyous over that, but it just doesn't really seem quite fitting for her character, you know? I think you made the right choice there.

But now the drama continues? I guess so. The travel to Hogwarts can be seen as a feat, but then again, you're probably not thinking about that. However, there can be complications with the baby because of the torture its mother had to endure.

And of course the dilema of that Harry and Draco don't know that the baby's Ron's! When will they learn this vital piece of info? Soon, I hope. I'm just itchin' to know how they will react to the news.

Update soon. Unless your schedule is as cluttered as mine, then take your sweet time. just not too long, kk? ]

Lots of Love,

Creative Touch

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ur no fair! I dont get it! Is snape good or bad? I like to think he is good cause in the seventh book i came to think of him in a WHOLE new light.. so whats going on! Im confused! lol great chappie update soon plz!

~Super

OMG poor Hermione still an amazing chapter please update like A.S.A.P thanks

I had been wondering what the shaking was. I'm not surprised that Narcissa blocked Draco from the manor. I like that Snape saved Hermione, shows that he's a good guy. Great job and please post more soon.

~Krystle Lynne~

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.