Awww

That is... Funny... I totally love edward. He is so sweet and sexy. I wish he was... MINE

Sexy. Thanks for sharing. xo

Oh, boy. That was sexy!

raspeberriesn n Edward a yummy combination!

beautiful writing skills )

thanks for sharing!

Awww poor sexually frustrated Edward. He's adorable and hot. Loved this one-shot, it was totally OOC but in a cute, sexy way ;)

oooooooooo! Very hot, had a similar experience with my child's father, but this involved bananas but finger sucking can be very erotic, especially if there is some red juice dribbling (considering the company!)

Glad Bella was able to act out his fantasy.

Very sexy and sweet! ;-)

I loved it hehe he was a naughty boy

that i a realy good story you should writting and u are a law student good luck i a lawyer and a writer at the same time so u can to the same. i love ur stories by the way you should give me a call at 5449023 i hope that can call and a great edward fantasy why dont you foone were edward has very hard sex with edward that makes want to leave and then she rund away edwardd finds and rapist her and then they have child and then bella turns into a vampire and then she want payback by using vaps hang cups to punihih edward. i think that u should add a more detail and make more lemony and you should but more acting . and u should make it you know what i mean girld like giving hom a blowjpb lol were be;lls is more suckvie and she likes to suck his dick

i kno my reviews suck im just so excited i love how your stories have a totaly diff side of edward heyy btw i was thinkin bout this storyi had an idea and was wonderin if ud consider it theres no lemons though bbut if you want to you could put lemons in heres my idea:

bella annd edward are friends, bella leaves to phoenix and when she comes back shes a tottal chic she like is totaly comfy with guys teases them and is totaly hot, bella thinks she got over her crush on edward but did she? edward has a crush to but is a little scared of asking her out like every teen boy

i kno how many other stories could i find like this but your my favorite author and i dont wanna reead anything else.

thanks twilight lova 66000

omg how bout edward heats up some chocolate to dip strawberrys for bella in he "accedently" drips chocolate on her shirt and bra and eventualy boob wen he decides to lick it clean next bella to wants to drip chocolate on edward but not on his chest if u catch my drift

uhhhh hi again just had another good idea how about if edward looked into bellas window one night only to find her completely naked then he has to come through the window and spend the night with a painfull erection

just a thought

i love the idea of edward having fantasies about bella hmmmm a good idea 4 1 though thats the hard part how about edward wanting to touch bellas boobs and he makes a bet with emmett or plays truth or dare or something actualy i think the bet thing could work like' if i win u have to touch bellas boobs at least once a day 4 a week" then ed says somthin like "k but if i win u cant touch rose 4 a week"

:) that was fun. Enjoyed it.